Comments by All Members
- ""I really am sorry/For I can not speak/CCan not break the silence" To have words you'd die to have flow from your tongue, and yet you say nothing for fear of what those words might bring...excellent write. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "To Break the Silence" by GothicBlack
- "i totaly agree with your poem. i too love to cut, but i have stopped,but given the chance i might give into temptation of a deadly sin again(self mutilation). the days seem much longer now. don't they?.....good write."
Posted by the dried flower on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "Much like the rest of us, I can regrettably relate too much to this write. Thats why I love this place... we're all the same, yet all so different. Great write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Echo of The Past" by GothicBlack
- "Now I haven't been on dp in probably over a year, and this is the kind of poem that makes me miss this site. I really feel what you're saying here."
Posted by ColdScaredAlone on "Echo of The Past" by GothicBlack
- "you have the skills of no one ive ever seen.. the way you present yourself in a poem is strong all the way through.. and no matter what, i love the way you write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Echo of The Past" by GothicBlack
- "*claps* i love this poem! the best part was the first and second stanzas. you showed ups and downs of being like this. it really ooked me.
~allie, the darkest rose"
Posted by Unknown on "Echo of The Past" by GothicBlack
- ""I lack substance/But carry sorrows/And cry real tears".....i think youve captured the secrets we all try to keep burried deep inside."
Posted by dying angel on "Echo of The Past" by GothicBlack
- "Omg what potent words. "I'm a secret mist whispered in the deepest sleep, just a dream of a girl"...that stanza stood out for me. Pretty damned amazing. *Bravo* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Echo of The Past" by GothicBlack
- "i think this poem explains so much pain and self conflict.. you have a way to express emotions, with out really using actions.. you are at the top 5 list for my favorite writers, and this is just another one of the reasons why"
Posted by mywristshurt on "If Only For Tomorrow" by GothicBlack
- "jeez..this was sombre riddled from beginning to end..you sadly repeat this 'I mam not beautiful, etc' like a mantra..i suppose it becomes the truth regardless of what others say anyway..holy heckers."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "If Only For Tomorrow" by GothicBlack
- ".... this ate me up from the inside out.. you have such talent, i cant say that enough..you have the emotion and the sting in your poems that just.. just tear away at my heart.. this is one of those many.. good work"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Lost In My Life" by GothicBlack
- "damn.. what a write.. you've got the power and soul to imagine and to give a mesage out that no one is perfect.. and you mean no body.. its only a matter of time until we end up in our own streets.. i loved the way you wrote this.. its got meaning"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Before The End" by GothicBlack
- "... you are an amazing writer and the emotions you have are put well into words with this poem.. i hope that soon your problems will fade away and you wont be as stressed.. beautiful poem"
Posted by mywristshurt on "As Life Stumbles On" by GothicBlack
- "you've penned despair very effectively in this write; the imagery, emotion, and metaphor together form the observation well; good write; =( lousy feelings to deal with though. *hugs* ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "As Life Stumbles On" by GothicBlack
- "I agree with said comments this utilises some serious political slam here...an incredible concept I think, god as just a bum etc...wow..it was engaging and thought provoking from top to bottom...fantastic write, well done!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Before The End" by GothicBlack
- "bloody powerful and engaging write; incredible meaning spills forth and will not be ignored from this; it takes a lot to send chills like that up my spine ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Before The End" by GothicBlack
- "wow.. no doubt the political use.. the forgotten one.. the act of kindness kicked to the curb all for some symbolic artiface.. the dollar.. and where do we roam where are we headin... this kicks some serious ass! thanks"
Posted by Unknown on "Before The End" by GothicBlack
- ""My life spun out of control/And i am simply the aftermath" Gods...I know how it is to be in this position. Excellent imagery. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Lost In My Life" by GothicBlack
- "but my wings, they're shriveled up...
much to say about being lost in our lack of understanding of who we should be.
great:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Lost In My Life" by GothicBlack
- "You have summoned up all of my feelings this night in your words..props to you and your beautiful unrequited mind."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost In My Life" by GothicBlack
- "damn i know this feeling too well! you have written an amazing peice of such a vile thing and made it beautifull. Depression never leaves us but it makes lovely poetry "
Posted by weyvern on "The Screaming In My Head" by GothicBlack
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