Comments by All Members
- "I sometimes wish I could return to that untouched girl once again....Innocence is a devastating lure and ticking time bomb. Aloha"
Posted by darkendomme on "Untouched" by Jay Dumas
- "Striking piece. Hit me in the heart. Stay strong, keep fighting and keep writing. Xx insatiable"
Posted by Insatiable on "The End" by Jay Dumas
- "It's the worst of emotions that make for some of the best of poetry. It's good that you have people there for you in times of need. Suicide is a heavy topic, and being able to write about it is good. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Queazenart on "The End" by Jay Dumas
- "That's quite a laundry list JD and guessing there are no New Year's resolutions in the mix. Enjoyed the exchange and closing internalization. Don't be so hard on yourself - others will gladly beat you up for yuks. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Internal Thoughts." by Jay Dumas
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