The End

By Jay Dumas

Opening a vein,
Is what I decide,
To watch the blood flow from inside,

No more will,
No more fight, 
I can see my end in sight,

My breath goes shallow,
My heart goes slow,
I whisper,  God I'm ready to go...

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Copyright 2017 Jay Dumas
Published on Friday, January 6, 2017.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Yet another poem of suicide. I feel it's necessary to promote awareness, please learn and no the signs. If it wasn't for my friends I wouldn't be here to write. Special thanks to, M.L,MH,JR for bringing me out of the darkness.
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  • A former member wrote: Very strong poem, I love it

  • Insatiable On Saturday, January 7, 2017, Insatiable (47)By person wrote:

    Striking piece. Hit me in the heart. Stay strong, keep fighting and keep writing. Xx insatiable

  • Queazenart On Saturday, January 7, 2017, Queazenart (212)By person wrote:

    It's the worst of emotions that make for some of the best of poetry. It's good that you have people there for you in times of need. Suicide is a heavy topic, and being able to write about it is good. Thank you for sharing.

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