Comments by All Members
- "Ouch... It's so painful to see your ex with a new girl! I recently saw my ex-bf in pub (while he lives in another country) here and he wasn't dancing with other girls, but the idea that he MIGHT... ;) *no jealousy* ;) Just keep in mind you are better than"
Posted by Linwe on "This isn't jealousy." by call to arms
- "A pretty good write, i really like your style and truth... it's just a tad to aimless for my liking. i really like the begining though, you have a lot of talent! ^autumn^"
Posted by A Broken Soul on "A Slave To Darkness" by call to arms
- "Jeez.. I can attatch this to a friend of mine.. it's a horribly sad thing to see. "The stagnant air he breathes
Repulses him" that was a very good line, well expressed."
Posted by Lynaes on "Sufficient Would Suffice" by call to arms
- "well, if this is the 'lesser' version, i really wish i could read French... This is touching and beautifully crafted. Lovely write."
Posted by purr_verse on "Small Shoebox" by call to arms
- ""The flowers will die
This time she won't
Cherish every petal".. this line cradled me but pushed me away at the same time, if that makes sense.. like the pain is too unbearable but your description is absolutely beautiful, this was a fine work. nicely"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Makeshift Hearts" by call to arms
- ""...I'm as sorry as you've ever been" - Wow__ what an astounding write. "He walks through the door. Daisies in one hand A bottle of Vodka in the other.". There's something about this write that's just really alluring . . it's strangely gratifying to read "
Posted by Unknown on "Makeshift Hearts" by call to arms
