Comments by All Members
- "I've lost two friends to many to suicide so much so that I had to write on it too. It's been a long time since I've had a work take my mind back to that point in time, when what you expressed here felt fresh. Anyhow thank you for the share and take care of yourself."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Suicide" by LunaFlower
- "No need to be forgiven! Life is shitty- Make something out of it! That's what got me writing in the first place. Anyways, great piece. It made me chuckle a little, it made me think a bit, it has balls enough to not beat around the bush on a really, REALLY serious subject. It's very negative in theme, but it's good to air out all the bad shit sometimes. Also, stanza 4 felt real and bitter. Good stuff. Hope you have a better day today!"
Posted by Queazenart on "Suicide" by LunaFlower
- "Thanks, Dan. I don't know if I can stop self harming, though. I've been doing it since I was nine, and I'm 21. Any tips?"
Posted by LunaFlower on "Imaginary" by LunaFlower
- "Skip the self-harm LF - it means they win. Here's a book of matches. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Imaginary" by LunaFlower
- "This was a hard read. I'm sorry you had to endure this. Welcome. "
Posted by Drea on "Exiled" by LunaFlower
- "Thank you. I really appreciate the feedback. I've actually never heard that saying before, but it definitely works. Thanks again."
Posted by LunaFlower on "Exiled" by LunaFlower
- "Thank you so much. I hope you can find peace from your childhood. I'm really sorry."
Posted by LunaFlower on "Exiled" by LunaFlower
- "Our parents are supposed to be the ones to protect us. Unfortunately it doesn't always work out that way. This was a very powerful write. Definitely hit me hard. I hope you find the love that you deserve Luna."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Exiled" by LunaFlower
- "Some finely rhymed couplets LF and like they always say: we can pick our nose, but we can't pick our parents. Things will get better - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Exiled" by LunaFlower
- "I couldn't help but tear up at this. My step-mom used to abuse me physically and emotionally, and I often wanted to hurt her as much as she's hurt me. Very raw and powerful, dearest. I hope that you find some peace in your life. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Exiled" by LunaFlower
- "Omg I'm not sure exactly what to say. I'm so very very sorry sweetie. Losing someone we love is unbearable. Telling you to be strong won't help I know. I lost my son. Strength was/is impossible. Live for her! Let her live through you!"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Kill and Tell No One" by LunaFlower
