Suicide

By LunaFlower

I'm right, everyone else is wrong
Put up a fight, it's a pleasure to tag along
Mama said, you shouldn't stay up this long
Correct me if I'm wrong

Fresh blades, making fire on my arms
Popping pills, getting a rush from my self harm
I'm a disgusting pig, bred and raised on an abusive farm
Go ahead and raise the alarm

Suicide
The only way out
The way you can figure out what your life's about
A positive way
To get through the day
I've been on my back, but i swear someday you'll pay
I'm a victim of suicide
I'm a victim of suicide

Life sucks, all is so pointless now
Mind fucks, you did so well you should take a bow
You raped my soul, and I think we all know how
And you took up all my time, more than I would allow

Suicide
The way to let go
It's salvation when you know it's your time to go
I feel so alive, but that has to end
The way to deal with things when you're feeling low
I'm a victim of suicide
I'm a victim of suicide.

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Published on Monday, April 17, 2017. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Lyrics"

Author's Note:

Forgive this song, I just feel extremely shitty today. I had to get it out.

Comments on "Suicide"

On Monday, April 24, 2017, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

I've lost two friends to many to suicide so much so that I had to write on it too. It's been a long time since I've had a work take my mind back to that point in time, when what you expressed here felt fresh. Anyhow thank you for the share and take care of yourself.
On Saturday, April 22, 2017, Commander_Cadaver (233) wrote:

Nice write. Very relatable and intense.
On Monday, April 17, 2017, Queazenart (200) wrote:

No need to be forgiven! Life is shitty- Make something out of it! That's what got me writing in the first place. Anyways, great piece. It made me chuckle a little, it made me think a bit, it has balls enough to not beat around the bush on a really, REALLY serious subject. It's very negative in theme, but it's good to air out all the bad shit sometimes. Also, stanza 4 felt real and bitter. Good stuff. Hope you have a better day today!
On Monday, April 17, 2017, LunaFlower (8) wrote:

Thank you so much. I really appreciate the positive feedback.