Comments by All Members
- ""Here on glass lips,
Are see through smiles"...Great opening and the emotion and flow of the rest of the piece was heart-wrenching especially come those final lines.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Faltering Life " by SinisterSinner
- "this was a great read for me and I connected with this poem immediately...lines my immoral cage...such a great work...thank you for sharing this reflection! -HM"
Posted by Unknown on "Read Between The Lines" by SinisterSinner
- "(encapturing lines perhaps?) You know yourself best; and yes, it is a gift. You can only unwrap it once you know and understand what's wrapped (kinda like an expected surprise). Cheers SS. Thanx for sharing :-)"
Posted by Void Vortex on "Read Between The Lines" by SinisterSinner
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I liked how you incorporated objects into your emotions - giving me quick flashes of snippets ... Enjoyed ... Devlin.
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Posted by Devil-lyn on "Feelings" by SinisterSinner
- "I really like this and i like how I really relate to this. good write, but i would use less abstract descriptions and go for a more streamlined, get to the point approach, rather than a long windy road that we (unconsiously) just skim through... alternatively, If you want to make your poems long, thats fine. use more rich words and and heart rythm.
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Posted by themasterhunter on "Feelings" by SinisterSinner
- "I like this ode unto your perseverance. An letter to a strong soul that can bear the weight of battle and come out a victor is an ode indeed."
Posted by Skye on "I Am Conqueror (Part 2)" by SinisterSinner
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