Feelings

By SinisterSinner

Emotional silence,
Cowering away,
Corners as dark as the abyss,
The abyss of nothing,
Drown in the ecstasy of sorrows,
Bring forth the pleasures of pain,
Let the needles flow through my blood,
Shove the knife deep down like your feelings,
Twist and slice,
See an all ready empty soul leave these eyes,
Brick by brick,
The past keeps adding weight,
Setting kerosene inside ablaze,
My once deep ocean,
Has come to dry out,
Now i struggle against endless deserts,
And forgotten wind howls,
The dawn is expected,
But never comes,
I've lost site of everything,
But keep walking on blindly,
Searching,
Without hope,
There is nothing left to do,
I give up,
I'm through.
 

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Copyright 2016 SinisterSinner
Published on Monday, November 7, 2016.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Devil-lyn On Monday, November 7, 2016, Devil-lyn (32)By person wrote:

    I liked how you incorporated objects into your emotions - giving me quick flashes of snippets ... Enjoyed ... Devlin.

  • themasterhunter On Monday, November 7, 2016, themasterhunter (43)By person wrote:

    I really like this and i like how I really relate to this. good write, but i would use less abstract descriptions and go for a more streamlined, get to the point approach, rather than a long windy road that we (unconsiously) just skim through... alternatively, If you want to make your poems long, thats fine. use more rich words and and heart rythm.

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