Comments by All Members
- "I'm loving your style. It's always raw and you don't sugar coat. I've felt like this. It's nice to see it in words. The more I read your work, the more I feel stupid for not reading it sooner. "
Posted by Drea on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
- "On bad days after my cup of coffee and a smoke I am prone to announcing..."Abort Mission! Abort Mission!" As in fuck this day! Not dealing with it. Well done. From thought to hand to paper.💚"
Posted by Willow Wept on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
- "Don't have anything insightful to say except I enjoyed this, A LOT.. some gteat metaphors and this is a situation I can def relate to..your writing appears to be getting Sharper, more sophisticated maybe...you might be improving sir and that is something :) "
Posted by out there on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
- "I don't like the title either, but I couldn't think of anything else that expressed what I felt when I wrote the poem. I'm open to suggestions for a new one."
Posted by Queazenart on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
- "Face reading is a Japanese art form, and body English another that has always fascinated me. Rare is the skillful author who can capture both with words. Your extended metaphor and characterization were wonderful, and I'm almost certainly wrongly guessing at diabetes, peripheral neuropathy, or perhaps just writer's block - so I won't (guess). Cheers Queaz! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
- "DAAAAAAAAMN. That was so brutally honest that I could just feel what you feel. Each line building up more and more for a final indirect blow as you walk away and leave the reader in awe. Brilliant. - 10:43"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
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There's so much personality in this poem, and your voice really comes through. The way you wrote it certainly invites a certain cadence when it's read. It's a mini poetic monologue, really. "
Posted by Anna McCarra on "Letter Letting" by Queazenart
- "First off congrats on potd :) This write was intense and perfectly penned, You always capture the emotions beautifully and I felt this loneliness deeply while reading. I admire your work and the honesty put in each piece."
Posted by River Lily on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "Reading this poem felt like like I was reading one of mine from when I was around your age because I felt the same way. Let me just say that things do get better. They get easier. Just hang in there bro. Great write and congrats on PotD. - 10:43"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "Congratulations bro on POTD much much deserved. This one was strong and steady with a perfect end. I had to reread it several times. Great job!"
Posted by Adagios on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "It was intense and sad but it kept me ao focused really awesome work to the top to the end.."
Posted by Unknown on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "Again Willow was right, a great piece. I see why she likes you so much. I told another of the poets she talks to that you all don't know what this site and you and the others have done for her. She is excited and smiles when talking about DP and your all's chats. Thank you for bringing my friend hope."
Posted by Karebear on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "I know Willow and she had told me about you. She said this was the first of your poems she read. I can see why she liked it. It's good."
Posted by Karebear on "No Decent Human Being" by Queazenart
- "I felt so many emotions while reading this, I guess because I relate to it so well. Been there all my life... alone and depressed. Anytime I talk about it with someone close they act like it's no big deal. I feel for you. The whole thing felt all to familiar. I'm always told I play the woe is me card, so I get the frustration of not being able to talk and feel close to those who are supposed to be closest to us. I very much like this piece, thank you for sharing a piece of yourself."
Posted by Gypsyeighty3 on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "I found this piece very well written and I can feel myself relate throughout. I hope all is well, keep your head up. "
Posted by Sashasetsfire on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
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