Comments by All Members
- "Lovely and simple. Seems as if it ends sort of abruptly. But i kind of like it that way."
Posted by wilted on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "Wow, side one, side two... constant struggle that everyone can relate to, and currently my daily war. Thanks for sharing this, so long ago, for me to enjoy today."
Posted by Sketso on "Faith (side one)" by Soulfire
- "Fantastical, silent magic. Love needs not spoken words. Love alone speaks volumes. Excellent short write :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Without Words" by Soulfire
- "i wished you could've gone on.. i only say that because i've never experienced someone in my family leaving for months and possibly dieing and want to know what its like.. i hope you keep going in this poem, i liked it.. it shows that you hate the govm. ("
Posted by mywristshurt on "Blood for Oil" by Soulfire
- "and thats how to learn, amen to that - but don't be afraid to take your time to develop poems.Like children , they don't grasp everything from the get go. Winks* good luck...Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "beautifully put.. your words flow gracefully together and you have a good way to write.. i like it"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Mend" by Soulfire
- " flowing...a procession, a process...of mending...this feels/tastes like a .begining.to me, riding upon the breakwater(s) of breath, anew..."
Posted by AniDayz on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "have to agree with the hatter here, it didn't do enough say enough really but your rhyme scheme was quite goood and didnt break for that good job ~GAP~"
Posted by Unknown on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "straight foward with the rhyme pattern s and choices of words, didn't do enough for me, yes it produces it's melody, but to obviously for me, sorry to say. I admire anyone's will to men though, just make the poems stand out."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "living in a weakened state of strength.....gathering pieces of the whole.....curing the cancer of apathy.....i admire your will to mend."
Posted by elisa on "Mend" by Soulfire
- " I beleive you just described half the population, so much better than most could for themselves"
Posted by Father_Faust on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "a painful existance it is to not be able to fix that which is broken. Gather the pieces, reassemble what's left in dedication, and stumble into tomorrow. Life begins when we let it end.... understood and able to relate."
Posted by Unknown on "Mend" by Soulfire
- "and this is the perfect epitome of why sometimes, it's best for all to just release a lover's hand and whisper those dreaded words: Goodbye. Wonderfully well done. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Letting Go" by Soulfire
- "perfect. i'm so sorry for your family. i am a liberal and radical, and i believe bush should die or be impeached, and the whole government should go to hell. i can't wait to leave this fuckng country.... "
Posted by Unknown on "Blood for Oil" by Soulfire
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