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Mend
By Soulfire
The world is alive with
brilliant colors
I try to blend in
but I'm not like the others
My heart once lively, vibrant and red
Now feels cold, life less and dead
I want to enjoy life: the here and now
but death is all around me and I don't know how
my cries won't stop
the pain won't end
my soul is numb
my heart won't mend
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© 2006 Soulfire
Published on Thursday, July 20, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, mywristshurt
(405)
wrote:
beautifully put.. your words flow gracefully together and you have a good way to write.. i like it
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
flowing...a procession, a process...of mending...this feels/tastes like a .begining.to me, riding upon the breakwater(s) of breath, anew...
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A former member wrote:
have to agree with the hatter here, it didn't do enough say enough really but your rhyme scheme was quite goood and didnt break for that good job ~GAP~
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
living in a weakened state of strength.....gathering pieces of the whole.....curing the cancer of apathy.....i admire your will to mend.
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, Father_Faust
(8) wrote:
I beleive you just described half the population, so much better than most could for themselves
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A former member wrote:
a painful existance it is to not be able to fix that which is broken. Gather the pieces, reassemble what's left in dedication, and stumble into tomorrow. Life begins when we let it end.... understood and able to relate.
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, Ozymandias
(29) wrote:
Simple, and beautiful. I just love it.
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