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- "What I adore is the feeling of comfort in that moment of embarrassment. He is truly someone to cherish if he makes you feel loved in those moments. This is beautiful. Well done. "
Posted by Unknown on "To Express Ones Deepest Thoughts" by Broken Rose
- "Heavy and profound metaphor. I hope you win your game of chess, I believe you will"
Posted by Adagios on "Game On" by Broken Rose
- "A simple yet beautiful piece. The frail desire to get her life back after moving on is clouded by her heart which still wants him back. Good one BR."
Posted by Anarchist on "Give me back my heart" by Broken Rose
- "such anger that flows throughout this poem, its relatable and very understanding. Good job though that you realized that he was a waste of space, atleast now you can move on and forget about the pathetic worm! You go girl keep up the good poetry"
Posted by Glass eyes on "Dam You" by Broken Rose
- "Beautiful , poetic and down right relatable! Absolutely love this poem its so out there and full of emotion. I feel the pain and anger but also sadness in this work, please be careful. Manipulating people into pawns on your chess board is a clever way to put together a poem its unique. Good job!"
Posted by Glass eyes on "The Chess Game Begins" by Broken Rose
- "I really love the meter of this poem, especially in the first few verses. It fits well with the anger."
Posted by Unknown on "Dam You" by Broken Rose
- "Words can hurt, love can more, but it seems to me you've closed his door. :) This poem screams to me yet in the end you still sound like a hero, As you rise above the evil in his heart. I love it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Welcome to the New Me" by Broken Rose
- "Wars are a subject of life's troubles.. Would you be declaring a 'war' of such against those who mistreat you? If I might add that though a few words seem out of place, you can find other meanings through them.. Such an interesting write and in truth I wish to know more. With such personal work of life's squanders; posting this to where all can see is bravery. Though through the mystery and awe.. I get a feeling that this piece is directed at a single person? Maybe someone who is able to read this?
Overall a great work and I will definetly be looking forward to knowing more about the writer behind the veil. Write on my friend, write on."
Posted by Unknown on "Game On" by Broken Rose
- "Declaration poetry is one of the most difficult forms because it has a very demanding word choice element. This work is bold and frank and the only critique I might offer is that I think "bored" in line 20 was intended to be "board." Overall, an interesting read inspiring the sense of force and resignation."
Posted by Unknown on "Game On" by Broken Rose
- ""Time heals all wounds" always seems to be the answer for these scenarios. And while that is true I've learned that no amount of time can make you stop loving someone. I had to find my closure, and be forced to realize that what I had was what I truly wanted, it took me almost losing it all for that to sink in. Hopefully you aren't as thick headed as I however. Good luck to you my dear."
Posted by Unknown on "Give me back my heart" by Broken Rose
- "I can relate to the feeling of pure embarrassment witnessed by that of a lover.. We share many moments together, but it's the one thing I miss most when she is away that I kept private. To find out that my other half felt the same way.. It give me so much closure.. Your man, he must be the luckiest guy alive and I'm sure he feels that way to be a part of your life. Since you're saying you wouldn't mind it happening again.. I'm sure he can make something happen..
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Posted by Unknown on "To Express Ones Deepest Thoughts" by Broken Rose
- "Even though you paint your wrists red there will always be someone who loves you no matter what keep your chin up lovely, stay strong and remember fuck the haters 👊"
Posted by Unknown on "just smile dont break" by Broken Rose
- "Really parasitic. Unless you've lived through it, how can you seeth darkness? You have many years to experience agony, torment and rape. Hope you transform your need to lash out into creativity which seeks to build rather than destroy. "
Posted by Unknown on "just smile dont break" by Broken Rose
- "Self doubt and frustration.. These feelings can torture your mind and bring on the wildest of emotions. In my own opinion, this work is a fantastic representation of what someone can and will suffer through depression and anxiety. Though other issues may occur, you must remember.. The people of this world each have different views on beauty.. And some, like myself, find that each 'flaw' someone may have only adds to their uniqueness as a person.. Each scar representing a fight they have overcome.. A new tale or story. I personally like to think of each scar or mark as a new chapter of life's problems, and as a representation of how we fought or problems. These things I find amazingly beautiful.. So please.. There is no need to hide in the shadows and dwell on what the inconsiderate may think. All you need to remember is that you are you.. And you need not apologise for how you act nor what you do.. Others will love you, what what you have been, what you are, and what you shall be.. You have a voice that deserves to be heard, so let it be heard."
Posted by Unknown on "just smile dont break" by Broken Rose
- "whether the voice is inside your own head or whispers in your ear from others, cut them out of your life. there are 7 billion people on this planet and you don't have to be around someone who is hurtful."
Posted by Nixx on "just smile dont break" by Broken Rose
- "im tired too. but not lonely. in a sense maybe, but im too tired from putting my energy into others all the time. its draining and just makes you want to give everything up.
thank you for sharing :) "
Posted by Nixx on "Nothing left but lonely tiredness" by Broken Rose
- "well composed and tragic...
i like these poem very much :)
it expresses feeling, known by many... but very few people are able to describe it...
just please promise me that you will never actually fall... nor you will stain your wrist with crimson red... (or not again in case you actually did....)
as very depressive person myself i'd like to tell you...
... It's never too late..."
Posted by God Is In The Rain on "Too late" by Broken Rose
- "Let your emotions flow.. Though people to do care my dear. I know that there's someone who always will care.. Let them guide the way to new heights, to greater happiness. He will wait for your hand..
Love can be a tricky mix of emotions, love turns into hate by the slightest remarks and yet you feel like there could have been more... Was he ever worth your time?
The answers you seek can only be found by you, you're the one to decide whether you can move on and try to trust another, another that will always be waiting. You have someone that cares about you dearly, as love is not limited to three words.. Let go of the past, I know it'll be hard, find new happiness and move into the future instead of the past. You have a voice that deserves to be heard, so let it be heard."
Posted by Unknown on "Replaced" by Broken Rose
- "I often wonder what love truly is and how it feels. Yet I can see now that it can make you weak and it can make you strong. Rise up and show that you are stronger than what people may think. Live and fight this battle with us called life"
Posted by Unknown on "Welcome to the New Me" by Broken Rose
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