just smile dont break

By Broken Rose

"That's it just a little longer,
you can do it girl keep yourself together. "

'Don't break.. don't break ..don't break!'

'That's it their walking away,
good girl wave and smile.'

'What's that you feel happy?'

'Now now don't you remember everything you did wrong?,
you do that's a good girl.'

'So why are you smiling?'

'What's that...because you still feel happy,
well may I remind you of how ugly you are?'

'How much of a baby you are?'
'Ooo how about how disgusting you are'?

'Oops did that hurt?'
'It did...oh but its the truth and you know it.'

'I mean tell me how someone can love a girl who has painted her wrists red?'

'Or who is so fucked in the head that they hear voices.'

'Exactly my dear,
no one.'

'That's it sweetheart let out the tears,
let out the cries of pain.'

'Now take that razor,
Good girl now you have what you need.'

'There we go for every tear I grow,
and for every cut I get stronger...'

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Copyright 2016 Broken Rose
Published on Thursday, January 14, 2016.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Even though you paint your wrists red there will always be someone who loves you no matter what keep your chin up lovely, stay strong and remember fuck the haters 👊

  • A former member wrote: Really parasitic. Unless you've lived through it, how can you seeth darkness? You have many years to experience agony, torment and rape. Hope you transform your need to lash out into creativity which seeks to build rather than destroy.

  • A former member wrote: Self doubt and frustration.. These feelings can torture your mind and bring on the wildest of emotions. In my own opinion, this work is a fantastic representation of what someone can and will suffer through depression and anxiety. Though other issues may occur, you must remember.. The people of this world each have different views on beauty.. And some, like myself, find that each 'flaw' someone may have only adds to their uniqueness as a person.. Each scar representing a fight they have overcome.. A new tale or story. I personally like to think of each scar or mark as a new chapter of life's problems, and as a representation of how we fought or problems. These things I find amazingly beautiful.. So please.. There is no need to hide in the shadows and dwell on what the inconsiderate may think. All you need to remember is that you are you.. And you need not apologise for how you act nor what you do.. Others will love you, what what you have been, what you are, and what you shall be.. You have a voice that deserves to be heard, so let it be heard.

  • Nixx On Friday, January 15, 2016, Nixx (235)By person wrote:

    whether the voice is inside your own head or whispers in your ear from others, cut them out of your life. there are 7 billion people on this planet and you don't have to be around someone who is hurtful.

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