To Express Ones Deepest Thoughts

By Broken Rose

To Express Ones Deepest Thoughts- is To Express Ones Deepest Desires.


How can one truly express their thoughts?
When its obvious to see their desire...

Some people just don't get it....
Some people can't understand it..

And sometimes people get annoyed if you try to make them tell you. ..

For me with what had happened was embarrassing. ..
And shameful...

Something like that is meant to be private...and yet was witnessed by another.....

Normally I should be scared...hurt....angry...
.....but i'm not...

Because the person that witnessed what happened...was my lover. ..

And I'm embarresed but glad he seen it....

im happy that he helped me feel more then I would...
that he understood what was going on... and joined in..making me feel comfortable with it. ...

Although at the end I cried because I was ashamed. .. I know that im glad it happened...and me crying was just from embarrassment...

In the end with what happened I love the man im with and trust him....

lets just say I hope it happens again.

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Copyright 2016 Broken Rose
Published on Monday, January 25, 2016.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

hi guys, I had no idea how to express my feelings to the man I love and this was the best I could do.
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  • A former member wrote: What I adore is the feeling of comfort in that moment of embarrassment. He is truly someone to cherish if he makes you feel loved in those moments. This is beautiful. Well done.

  • Drea On Monday, January 25, 2016, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    The feeling behind this I think is universal. Yet, we feel like it only happens to us.

  • A former member wrote: I can relate to the feeling of pure embarrassment witnessed by that of a lover.. We share many moments together, but it's the one thing I miss most when she is away that I kept private. To find out that my other half felt the same way.. It give me so much closure.. Your man, he must be the luckiest guy alive and I'm sure he feels that way to be a part of your life. Since you're saying you wouldn't mind it happening again.. I'm sure he can make something happen..

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