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- ""as we linger on spent promises." And those last two lines...you've swept me away into a masterpiece, a place where the truth speaks through any words you could think to say because that's just how well you know better. Excellent imagery here. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "the social standards of beauty" by Saint Sentient
- ""but it's hard to believe whispers/when the screams drown them out."..& "these hands. they're broken./and my tongue isn't worth believing."...amazing indeed. you plant this sorrow in my heart that i'm sure i'll never get rid of. "
Posted by dying angel on "-said the tears to the pavement." by Saint Sentient
- ""I'd make a point and multiply it by five
to force this fist into the the earth" i'm pretty sure the double "the" was a mistake, but it really stuck out to me in that sentence. like a tremble, or that hesitation before taking another step."
Posted by dying angel on "lacrimal lakes." by Saint Sentient
- "i've been going through you're poetry and i'm honestly so mad at myself for not having discovered you sooner. you write the kind of poetry i love to read. "emotions mixed with whitewashed lipstick/as your kisses erase all traces of simplicity" amazing."
Posted by dying angel on "monet skies. -as done by picasso" by Saint Sentient
- "Amazing. I am loving the sand/glass metephore there. The title really seems to set the stage. "Lacrimal Lakes" and its punctuated when you speak of the "disheartening downpour" what a "tear jerker"!
-Natelle"
Posted by Dei on "lacrimal lakes." by Saint Sentient
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