lacrimal lakes.

By Saint Sentient

shove.deep: this pen into my temple.
break skin- and drive away the pain. one line
at a time.

one time- line by line. I'd make a point and multiply it by five
to force this fist into the the earth-
paint a fracture with my blood and measure the depth
of the world's sorrow in those eyes.

like walking barefoot- on melting sand.
when the glass is never thick enough. fearing falling.
but jumping all the same.
hoping. just praying
that a shard won't puncture my throat when I tumble.

fumbling for my keys.
this downpour is disheartening.

I need to sleep.

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Copyright 2005 St. Sentient
Published on Monday, October 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    Amazing. I am loving the sand/glass metephore there. The title really seems to set the stage. "Lacrimal Lakes" and its punctuated when you speak of the "disheartening downpour" what a "tear jerker"! -Natelle

  • A former member wrote: haha... exquisite... there is a suggested context here it seems, with the keys, and yet the first stanza seems outside that context... intriguing

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, October 3, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    'paint a fracture with my blood and measure the depth of the world's sorrow in those eyes.' that second stanza is rather vivid...a gaping avante-garde...

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, October 3, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    one word misspelled 'barefoot' (thought this deserved perfection) a solitary, seemingly dejected piece...graphically accomplished and blunty simplified by that last line. intriguing work. ~m~

  • Sentient Ignorance On Monday, October 3, 2005, Sentient Ignorance (9)By person wrote:

    beautiful, it makes my blood sing.

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