lacrimal lakes.
By Saint Sentient
shove.deep: this pen into my temple.
break skin- and drive away the pain. one line
at a time.
one time- line by line. I'd make a point and multiply it by five
to force this fist into the the earth-
paint a fracture with my blood and measure the depth
of the world's sorrow in those eyes.
like walking barefoot- on melting sand.
when the glass is never thick enough. fearing falling.
but jumping all the same.
hoping. just praying
that a shard won't puncture my throat when I tumble.
fumbling for my keys.
this downpour is disheartening.
I need to sleep.
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Copyright 2005 St. Sentient
Published on Monday, October 3, 2005.
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
Amazing. I am loving the sand/glass metephore there. The title really seems to set the stage. "Lacrimal Lakes" and its punctuated when you speak of the "disheartening downpour" what a "tear jerker"! -Natelle
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A former member wrote:
haha... exquisite... there is a suggested context here it seems, with the keys, and yet the first stanza seems outside that context... intriguing
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On Monday, October 3, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
'paint a fracture with my blood and measure the depth of the world's sorrow in those eyes.' that second stanza is rather vivid...a gaping avante-garde...
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On Monday, October 3, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
one word misspelled 'barefoot' (thought this deserved perfection) a solitary, seemingly dejected piece...graphically accomplished and blunty simplified by that last line. intriguing work. ~m~
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On Monday, October 3, 2005, Sentient Ignorance
(9) wrote:
beautiful, it makes my blood sing.