Comments by All Members
- "truly awesome display of controlled expression. speaks itself clearly through clenched teeth. very impressive piece of work .. funguy "
Posted by capt_funguy on "turn in" by odetobarbie
- "this is fantastic. i really mean that.. it's fucking fantastic. i'm so pleased to see that you've posted, but i'm dissappointed for you, to come here & see there are no other words where there should be.."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "EcoPass" by odetobarbie
- "this is superb writing, you say much with fewer words, no redundancies, just well delivered messages."
Posted by Unknown on "Dictator" by odetobarbie
- "wow. and what words escape from tight lips? "Pungent" ... indeed. I can see the test, a slipping away, its beautifully feminine... makes me want to rise to the challenge."
Posted by Unknown on "find me" by odetobarbie
- "guilt trip extravaganza. The last line was especially ripe for me, a guilt junkee of many years. Has the ring of truth to it, and falsehood. I really loved this."
Posted by Unknown on "double fault" by odetobarbie
- ""a hand cannon and a wink" The mixed metaphors you use capture life, and I am sure, the conflict we all find within it."
Posted by Unknown on "Plastic Pillows" by odetobarbie
- "awesome! you always surprise me with your words, the way they develop never comes in any way I expect. Should I have an elated feeling at the end of this? ;) Like your style."
Posted by Unknown on "Morning Commute" by odetobarbie
- "wow, this is intriguing...that last line impales and rearranges. the images/tropes are freakin extraordinary and the message intense"
Posted by Unknown on "Boredom Whore" by odetobarbie
- "there's so much in this i'd like to quote...very fluid and the images were constant in my head. your words are flawless and ripping."
Posted by Unknown on "double fault" by odetobarbie
- "i read this forward three times and backwards four .. it made me do that .... i owed it that .. im glad this happened - thankyou very much ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Quitters Never Win" by odetobarbie
- "'..... filthy propaganda..... ' - '..... praise the fucking lord...' this bends my mind in a rather stimulating sort of way..."
Posted by elisa on "Java HotSpot" by odetobarbie
- "Well adjectives like "hopelessly" generally give a dark/depressed feel. I really liked the imagery I have seen the crows feet carved by nights and days spent in escape I love the contrast and connotation of the final word, "dandelions""
Posted by Unknown on "cubicle kingdom" by odetobarbie
- "" sometimes " can be pulled along on a golden chariot ... an exalted word that discomforts everyone for their own personal replay reasons ... slick ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Sometimes" by odetobarbie
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