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cubicle kingdom
By odetobarbie
people
aheadbehind
allbore!bore!bore!
alas, the dark corner
is too bright
to conceal hopelessly carved
pupils
to rivale the king’s –
rimmed by crows feet
carved by
desperate dispair
disgraced
by
degenerated
ideas built
of
panic & dandilions.
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Copyright 2005 odetobarbie
Published on Saturday, August 6, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Well adjectives like "hopelessly" generally give a dark/depressed feel. I really liked the imagery I have seen the crows feet carved by nights and days spent in escape I love the contrast and connotation of the final word, "dandelions"
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On Saturday, August 6, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358)
wrote:
this was a really interesting read though i wonder at the deeper meaning of it... it had a depressed/dark feel but i couldn't say why exactly
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