Comments by All Members
- "This felt like beautiful grunge, if that makes any sense. your word choices suit the piece perfectly."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Not Nearly" by odetobarbie
- "Seriously though, I love the way you tickle the mind with possibilities of implied meaning, and such unique metaphor and juxtaposition that somehow confuses and makes sense at the same time. I actually could never write something like this, but I am glad you can. Your work always leaves me wanting more."
Posted by Unknown on "Not Nearly" by odetobarbie
- "Wow, it's been a long time since I've read or written poetry.I'm glad I read this even if it is 3 years after posting. The style is so you; challenging and intriguing. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Not Nearly" by odetobarbie
- "I continue to be drawn to 'Eye...nose belly' 'dip behind' the first because it does spark, and the second because that's the meat of this for me. Exactly what I needed tonight, thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "Q&A" by odetobarbie
- "So dismal... I liked the flow of this piece. Kept me moving right along... Nice write."
Posted by Unknown on "work week" by odetobarbie
- "hmmm... this was... very entertaining, though im not sure who the anger is directed towards. or perhaps you just rally want that coffee lol"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Java HotSpot" by odetobarbie
- "Don't know what to think past good. so it's good. but can't grasp how. don't worry. i like it that way."
Posted by Unknown on "Shallow" by odetobarbie
- "ebb and flow ... constatnt continuum .. clock mechanisms grinding their gears .. attention there and gone . comparative like a resignation - there's a world in this .. spinning .. and it's beautiful ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "the beached fantastic" by odetobarbie
- "the nightmare that is 4A.M. sweatfilm coated, cockringed slave to - can i own you?, sick, twisted priority - risk their lives for a token pair of little white sox ... that's how i read it, and yeah, theyre out there ... great stuff ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "rich or weary" by odetobarbie
- "this is like hiroshima, the manson family or anything else that would be impossible if it hadn't actually happened - a very specific kind of truth that you wouldn't believe if "
Posted by capt_funguy on "ghetto wife" by odetobarbie
- "this is serious. yet another inspirational piece. your words prove how fun intensity can be. like murder on a playground . funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Plastic Pillows" by odetobarbie
- "man, so swift, so determined, so original... you're writing what hasn't been written , and that's so fricken' rare. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "EcoPass" by odetobarbie
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