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Not Nearly
By odetobarbie
artless madness
spilling into
journalistic morass
rhymes, nearly enough
Dr. Pepper toes
smashing on
Hollywood kisses
smarts, nearly enough
jokerman chitterchatters
hovering above
shallow abysmals
lost, nearly enough
swanky bars
tearing away
tired plotlines
drunk, nearly enough
action words
stopping under
passé soundtracks
move, nearly enough
limitless imagination
fading across
selfish grandiosity
lies, nearly enough
charming sights
glimmering over
words too soon
love, nearly enough
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© 2009 odetobarbie
Published on Tuesday, February 3, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Not Nearly"
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A former member wrote:
Seriously though, I love the way you tickle the mind with possibilities of implied meaning, and such unique metaphor and juxtaposition that somehow confuses and makes sense at the same time. I actually could never write something like this, but I am glad you can. Your work always leaves me wanting more.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, it's been a long time since I've read or written poetry.I'm glad I read this even if it is 3 years after posting. The style is so you; challenging and intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
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On Thursday, February 5, 2009, RubyXero
(484)
wrote:
nearly...but not. i like the nice steady beat of this
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2009, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
fluid, and practiced......your prose counters...a earnest and sharp mood. Poetry Incarnate! urban
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