Comments by All Members
- "I've read this piece several times without comment--so many times, in fact, I'm feeling a bit peeping-tomish sneaking up for a read and skulking off again. Yes, Josh can seduce me--in fact he already has. Stunning write, love the way I get wrapped up in it. I am especially fond of the fourth stanza and the close is brilliant and seductive."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Can Josh Seduce You?" by Revolting Theatre
- "Lookin' for a dreamer huh? I wrote a poem about a dreamer once. Might find it on my profile page still. Can't remember. Loved the poem. I'll have to look at more of yours."
Posted by Simply Me on "I Need a Dreamer" by Revolting Theatre
- "simply that this is like...eh...for a topic to me right now...sorry i'm a little cynical and disintrested in gushy emotional heartstring attachment stuff right now. Nothing personal or anything."
Posted by Unknown on "Can Josh Seduce You?" by Revolting Theatre
- ""Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point." yeah that's usually the problem....get lost on your way to the point for about na hour ok?..poem was alright i enjoy some of your other works better "
Posted by Unknown on "Can Josh Seduce You?" by Revolting Theatre
- "all most long for a soul mate, but few let on that is the very thing they want. you're ideal soul mate is well described in this poem, you use so many descripitive words to explain obsticles. it's great."
Posted by Unknown on "I Need a Dreamer" by Revolting Theatre
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