Comments by All Members
- "I live how you didn't try to keep the rhyme flowing but at the end it just can natural. I do believe your addicted but it's okay we all are. Diamonds like this are few and far between. Thanks for sharing this hidden treasure with me. "
Posted by Unknown on "I Drank Poetry - Ars Poetica" by Shikiryu
- "I absolutely love this! Idk that I've ever read something with quite this concept and it describes perfectly how poems can capture you just as this one did for me. Very well done "
Posted by Unknown on "I Drank Poetry - Ars Poetica" by Shikiryu
- "Forget the fairytales. In simple terms love is putting up with someone's bullcrap while they're willing to put up with yours :)"
Posted by Patches on "Love is Non-Exisistent" by Shikiryu
- "Again, drawing a lot of parallels between the two of us, love can be a fickle thing...feelings are dynamic to a fault, the love of today can be the loathing of tomorrow and yet: we take that chance, time and again, because love can somehow validate us, make us feel whole after running on empty for longer than we care to admit. It's no wonder some would choose to write it off, and say it simply doesn't exist: the real thing is just so difficult to find. To inspire that kind of musing from me is a hallmark of the underlying gift you seem to possess, as I said before, nurture that gift."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Love is Non-Exisistent" by Shikiryu
- "I'm drawing a lot of parallels to my past self, I too had a sort of kinship with the dark, I felt untouchable there, I suppose. I liked some of the diction used in this piece, something about it simply struck all the right chords. Nurture your talent, and stay awhile. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Inner Truth" by Shikiryu
- "Welcome to dp, I really like this a lot , I can feel what you are conveying the end was perfect. "
Posted by Unknown on "Inner Truth" by Shikiryu
- "Yes you are right and at times new love is very overwhelming and without wanting it to be more than it is can seem like that all on its own. Like they say hindsight is 20/20"
Posted by Unknown on "Love is Non-Exisistent" by Shikiryu
- "Spoken like someone who has been married. I'm very familiar with hate and anger but I don't think that's all there is for everyone. This is still a good read though."
Posted by Damien on "Love is Non-Exisistent" by Shikiryu
- "True, but if you still compare your life to fire then there's light still. Make the darkness your fuel; and what rises from the explosion may be darker as well... but also embodied in fire of renaissance. Live for your art but most for yourself."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Inner Truth" by Shikiryu
