Comments by All Members
- "I like what you did here. It feels written from the perspective of someone else. Leading on the other whom they feel is caught in the lust for love. Syllables were masterful and the message speaks to many. Well done."
Posted by RepulsiveAttraction on "Sweet Nothings " by drasticdaydreams
- "I liked this. It feels well crafted and is a stimulating read. Poetry "snapshots" are sometimes of places we've been, and sometimes not. Mostly this is a clear image. Well done, thank you.
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Posted by bpathos on "Sweet Nothings " by drasticdaydreams
- "Not all truth is long drawn out layers of complexity, some are as simple as this. The art of conciseness is. A well thought out sentence is worth more than a book of babble. Well done."
Posted by bpathos on "Just a Moment " by drasticdaydreams
- "Short and sweet.
I love this.
We too often try to hard to analyze the joys of life.
Let live, let love.
Welcome to DP ♥"
Posted by Unknown on "Just a Moment " by drasticdaydreams
- "Truth is no enemy,... or friend. It just is. Can that face in the pawn shop window really be me? The hair ball of truth is upon us. Nice write, I liked this."
Posted by bpathos on "Contrast" by drasticdaydreams
