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"oh this is awesome. very very cool."
Posted by AHHH on "An Unfortunate Encounter with the Train" by antiScripsony

"nice...nice nice! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "michael michael (second verse)" by antiScripsony

"This is completely goddamn amazing...thank heavens i got to read this...brilliance incarnate!"
Posted by Solace on "The 36th Street Community Sanitation Department" by antiScripsony

"it's hard to write on a train , it's hard to write on a moving car ... this is amazing work ... tuned metal on metal reality ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "An Unfortunate Encounter with the Train" by antiScripsony

"mechanical repetition ... steady as she goes , but not so steady at all ... trainwreck , carcrash ... wreckage careening off the path laid steady as she goes ... steady as .... "
Posted by capt_funguy on "An Unfortunate Encounter with the Train" by antiScripsony

"Tasty...I could hear it being sung into my ear. The last line is not what I expected, and a shot to the gut...simply great read."
Posted by Six-Out on "An Unfortunate Encounter with the Train" by antiScripsony

"Your style is very distinctive, and this piece is a fantastic example of your works. wonderful reflections; i love the feelings this evokes, and the way you bring tangible tangents to the (not.so) everyday. lovely."
Posted by purr_verse on "An Unfortunate Encounter with the Train" by antiScripsony

"This one carries itself it very well."
Posted by Future of Despond on "An Unfortunate Encounter with the Train" by antiScripsony

"I just read this again...and I still love it..."
Posted by Mademoiselle_Minx on "Brasil" by antiScripsony

"i read this , and pictured myself in the garage doorway of ... manhattan 6 .. track rythm still in my bones , and nothing in my pockets ... this was amazing .. a touchable wakedream ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "The 36th Street Community Sanitation Department" by antiScripsony

"Um....damn? This was intense...to say the least."
Posted by Six-Out on "1989" by antiScripsony

"Mmm, agreed with Trop. The flow was incredible from start to stop. A tasty number you've served up here. "
Posted by Six-Out on "Brasil" by antiScripsony

"I love it . . I swear, sometimes reading you I feel like I've read so much more than a few stanzas of lyrics . . there is so much here, and it's getting unoriginal to call you original ;) But you are. Well done."
Posted by cre on "The 36th Street Community Sanitation Department" by antiScripsony

"Wish nailed it.. Original and unique.. thats why I loved every bit of it.. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "The 36th Street Community Sanitation Department" by antiScripsony

"I thought I could tell from the title that this would be an interesting piece; and you didn't disappoint, this is fucking amazing. Original.. creative.. Kinda magical. Wow. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "The 36th Street Community Sanitation Department" by antiScripsony

"i made up my own tune to this almost immediately. i hope it at least vaguely resembled the one you'd intended... Excellent piece; love that penultimate verse especially... and the "You're existential" one too. damn, um, fine. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "The 36th Street Community Sanitation Department" by antiScripsony

"i'll have to agree with everyone who said this is unique...what a pleasant thing it is to find something that i have never seen before...no one could accuse you of trying to be like anyone else...how refreshing"
Posted by girlafraid on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"sharp nonhazy suddenlysurreal corners... the third stanza i find mesmerically cool somehow... strong cadence underpinning the variety of original imagery here; fine write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"a unique peice indeed, devilishly dreamlike in substance, was a real treat to read, effortless, great stuff."
Posted by Unknown on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"I like how the structuresubect is different than anything I've ever read. We have unlimited capabilities when constructing our work, this is a screaming example.. well done..:::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"trance inducing, awesome stuff, totally unique.. got no more words now, but this is great, what planet are you from?"
Posted by Daemonicus on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"whichever is your most current write . . I like how I can pick out threads and know that I'm relating it to the right thing . . yet see other parts and wonder what I'm missing . . I always want to understand more. I like it."
Posted by cre on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"I didn't like my other comment. I know this speaks to so many things . . at least, I always get that feeling from your writings. Like practically everything you've recently worried over is answered and taken care of and it's packaged up all nicely in whi"
Posted by cre on "An Internet Program" by antiScripsony

"You always manage to draw me in . . and part of it is how insane I go knowing I don't know everything you're thinking. There is so *much* in this one, that I could read it a million times. I especially like the "uninformed uniformed" stanza."
Posted by cre on "The Plagiarized Archives" by antiScripsony

"The originally-phrased imagery in this is excellent; "It's my subremembered artifact" particularly appeals to me... lovely write. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "The Plagiarized Archives" by antiScripsony

"To a cup of Tea [raises glass] There there. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The Plagiarized Archives" by antiScripsony

"I like the flow of this one - good one! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Brasil" by antiScripsony

"i've just read everything, and i have to agree that I like this best...i hope to see more from you, it's rare that i sit and read everything someone has written and wish there was more...welcome to DP."
Posted by girlafraid on "1989" by antiScripsony

"This has a different, more subtle taste than your other pieces thus far, and I have to agree with Cre, this does go to the top. ~ wen"
Posted by manywalks on "1989" by antiScripsony

"This was imbued with its own kinetic energy. Loved the pace and flow of this as well as the subtle little nuances carred throughout. ~ wen"
Posted by manywalks on "A Song for Physical Science" by antiScripsony

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