Comments by All Members
- "doesnt make sense to me and it seems to not fit with the rest of this. Well done overall,though,I can really relate to the space you are writing from"
Posted by Northstar on "blurred" by Zahtsk
- "I really like the feel of this piece. However, in my very humble opinion the line "To die in this place empty and cold, sweet hearts no long stand as strong" "
Posted by Northstar on "blurred" by Zahtsk
- "Your mind must work in such an intelligent philosophical way to have come up with this. Either that, or you're drugged up. Whichever way, good write. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "blurred" by Zahtsk
- "this was a joyous ride,space odysey like,in an inertia of confusion
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Posted by Anth on "blurred" by Zahtsk
