War and Creation

By Zahtsk

Peace is just a stepping stone; an end to the war however it is just an end to that and nothing more. What comes next? Nothing? We let all this damage remain just to rot and fester...
We allow the little girl in the corner of some ruined house be afraid of the light in the dark? Cowering and praying to a god that has left her...
In the howls of the night do we allow the boy, a brother, a son, to take up a shovel and burry his mother in the ground where he use to park his bike, that is now melted and burning? Do we leave him alone with his young sister, wondering...
Cold and stiff now is the father who wanted nothing more than to protect his family from enemies which he harbored no ill against, to feed his family. He didn't agree with the army he joined perhaps, he just needed the money. But now he we left a family alone. He died two months ago.
This is peace, the war has ended, here we are left at this stepping-stone. Peace is the end of the war, a halfway, a stepping-stone. Why did we stop here? Where is creation?
How can peace be the opposite of war? How can the absence of conflict be the opposite of destruction, wouldn't creation be it. Why have we stopped here?

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Copyright 2004 Zahtsk
Published on Thursday, July 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Thorn On Thursday, September 1, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    This is indeed powerful. I want answers to some of these questios, too.

  • A former member wrote: Very very well written. I could read this again and again and still be paralyzed by the way you convey such powerful feeling. ~*~ Rose ~*~

  • mysticventures On Thursday, July 29, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    humm - good questions - they need to be answereed by somebody!

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