Dawn

By Zahtsk

The fragile down collides with the sunset. No longer does my road go on. No longer doth I let. No longer struggle. Now deep in the pond.
It did start but a simple dream Elegant and as beautiful as a rose. But it did become a dreadful scheme. A dark scheme. With each bow to each blow it did worsen.
I do remember the start, I remember the simple road, With the beautiful rose. I do not want to remember the end.
The struggle now over, Where'ere I may turn now will end. All at once. So now I know where I do turn maters not. Now in the pond fond dreams once held fade away like those lost reflections as I pass.

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Copyright 2004 Zahtsk
Published on Sunday, August 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • eternal despair On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, eternal despair (66)By person wrote:

    \m/ good write

  • AHHH On Monday, August 2, 2004, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    good job- michelle

  • Soulseeker On Monday, August 2, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    WOW... This is so vivid... A wonderful write! Bethany

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