Comments by All Members
- "I really enjoy the format and premise of this piece. "Meaningless stare : Meaningless thoughts/Why is it all the good I forgot?" is my favorite stanza out of the bunch, but really they're all great parts to a great whole. Btw fourth from the bottom stanza says "seems" when it should be "seams" and I know it's probably annoying to have someone comment on a little spelling error like that but I can't help it DX Otherwise spectacular poem! "
Posted by Queazenart on "Meaningless World : Blank Life" by LiesWithin
- "I'm not sure how I finished that without tears in my eyes. Truly a beautiful, horribly sad piece. Reading it was all too relatable. Thank you for writing this. "
Posted by BrideToAgony on "Wish" by LiesWithin
- "Many can relate my friend. Myself included. But in time things can change trust me. it may seem hopeless and no end in sight. but their is a light somewhere. great piece though very sad. don't give up"
Posted by Allen on "Wish" by LiesWithin
- "I can relate to this beautiful, yet sad poem. I'm still depressed but things have gotten a lot better with time. I'm not stuck in that same dark place I was, and I know you'll find your way out of the darkness too. Write on."
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Wish" by LiesWithin
- "Myself letting go has never been my problem, it's when they decide to let me go that sends me into an emotional spiral. But I self sabotage until it eventually happens so you'd think it's what I want"
Posted by Unknown on "Letting Go" by LiesWithin
- "I know sometimes you've heard this, but if the world considers you're not worth it, the world is not worth of you. There is always someone that can appreciate all your nonsense, madness, despair, poetry and self-destruction. In my country we have this expression: "There's always a broken one for an unstitched one." Bad translation but hope you understand it."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Three In The Morning" by LiesWithin
- "I know EXACTLY what that's like. Self justification to the ghost of yesterday, but no one to hear you. When the bolt of anxiety shocks from sleep, and there's nothing but an empty room for you greet. At 3am, when the demons come calling. You are not alone."
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Three In The Morning" by LiesWithin
- "Simply stated and stunning! I could feel the cool summer day after reading it! Good Luck! :D
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Posted by Unknown on "You" by LiesWithin
- "The truth is beautiful but so are lies. An outstanding write, very much enjoyed."
Posted by Unknown on "Who I Am" by LiesWithin
- "You seem to own your suffering and I respect that. You went through a perilous self search, no sypathy for your own skin. I'd say stick your honesty up peoples asses until their eyes cross. I like it, I love it."
Posted by Phalanx on "Who I Am" by LiesWithin
