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Meaningless World : Blank Life
By LiesWithin
Blank walls : Blank mind
What is it that you see inside?
Blank stare : Blank thoughts
Tell me again, I forgot
Blank ways : Blank dreams
Why is it nothing is what it seems?
Blank words : Blank eyes
Why bother speaking, it's all lies
Blank clouds : Blank sky
I move on, even when I want to die
Meaningless walls : Meaningless mind
Why is it me I'm stuck inside?
Meaningless stare : Meaningless thoughts
Why is it all the good I forgot?
Meaningless ways : Meaningless dreams
Reality is tearing at the seems
Meaningless words : Meaningless eyes
I spend my days asking the whys
Meaningless clouds : Meaningless sky
The world seems to move, heaving a heavy sigh
Meaningless world : Blank life
I will try my best to stay alive
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Copyright 2015 LiesWithin
Author's Note:
Sorry if it doesn't make sense but I was going through some stuff and this was the resultComments on "Meaningless World : Blank Life"
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On Thursday, May 19, 2016, Queazenart
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wrote:
I really enjoy the format and premise of this piece. "Meaningless stare : Meaningless thoughts/Why is it all the good I forgot?" is my favorite stanza out of the bunch, but really they're all great parts to a great whole. Btw fourth from the bottom stanza says "seems" when it should be "seams" and I know it's probably annoying to have someone comment on a little spelling error like that but I can't help it DX Otherwise spectacular poem!
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