Comments by All Members
- "shadows slipping along a thin ledge of sadness, causes a lot of mind and heart turning... over and around... drifting deeper... nicely done hun"
Posted by NikesRain on "Bury and Forget" by glasshouse
- "A cross, my shield on the altar of her neck .. Came to think of that Sean Penn movie line. I do not think there is actual death in this poem however. The msg seems more of a personal breakup related poem to a friend. "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Bury and Forget" by glasshouse
- "fantastic ending. ..mayhap a call for the reclaiming of romanticism and less destruction in words. . .? in that we use our wounds as words too much, a somber eloquent piece. ."
Posted by Unknown on "Fog City" by glasshouse
- "oh wow...egads.. ..such a poignant film noir piece; a cloth of black 'velvetries'. .divine images staccato stopped in time; labyrinthian in structure and the ending is so wonder[land]ful. .. "
Posted by Unknown on "Jars of Love-Shaped Water" by glasshouse
- "I had to read this twice to really get the flavor. A subtle thing to capture, that apprehension...to attraction? to commitment...to false pretense?/fear from prior injury "
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Woman In The Wall" by glasshouse
- "When I think naked, has shame or misconduct(as with my toddler thinking it hilarious to stir up neighbors bolting outside from tub) somehow implied, nudity evokes thought of art or truth exposed in beauty."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Woman In The Wall" by glasshouse
- "love.. shouldnt have to be this much work; we make it twist up; just turn, turn into something graceful, beautiful; i empathize with the ''bell tower prodigy'' [i too have that affliction]. wrenching wrought work; a voice breaking beyond all boundaries.."
Posted by Unknown on "Woman In The Wall" by glasshouse
- "love this, and i love the ending... good wraps are hard to pull off, and i dig it when people hit it on the head. the only thing i can think to critique, is the word nakedness... maybe gaze my nudity? somehow, nudity just seem to fit better."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Woman In The Wall" by glasshouse
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