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- "the personification is perfection; breath walking away, abandoning 'us', holding on to what is so human in each of us. . . .introspective; intuitive; intelligent. . . ~ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Haggard" by glasshouse
- "Yes, the occasional rhyme and the soft beating rhythms giving depth a vague structure made this such a beauty to read. I feel the same way about this boy I love. His power to hurt is equal only to his power to heal."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Sew My Wounds" by glasshouse
- ""We just assume That it’s the moon Who gave us half a chance" This is quite an interesting history lesson; what did I learn? Well, I learned you are a unique writer w/ vivid imagery; there are "Shards of magic" in this poem, reflections like the..."
Posted by Unknown on "Dance on Glass (A History Lesson)" by glasshouse
- "..."Shattered Himalayas". If i havn't learned anything in history, I'm not sure it matters 'cause i like your words & the way you use them. It's a dance, like evolution, time and the moon's phases. Diamonds, and well structured. Nice! "
Posted by Unknown on "Dance on Glass (A History Lesson)" by glasshouse
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