Comments by All Members
- "It is always horrible to see a family torn apart, your words ring with real emotion, in such a way that connects with the reader. Nice job here, certainly a rated 10 from me :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Family Untied!" by Lady Poetry
- "I really liked the beginning. It kept me interested as I read it. Neat structure."
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by Lady Poetry
- "Caitlyn I love grotesque...I write for imagery xx so glad you liked it! I will upgrade my account after I get paid for looking after others xx"
Posted by Lady Poetry on "Battlefield!" by Lady Poetry
- "MP...I love Black Sabbath x I actually wrote this after watching a gothic rock music piece with my ex...Hit with imagery...and yay there it was.. Ribbons is very dark ...very Browning ish! my first poem on here! In real life I'm kind and gentle...a nurse..LOL with a penchant for dark poetry! I also do sweet flowers and love..LOL xx Livvi x"
Posted by Lady Poetry on "Battlefield!" by Lady Poetry
- "Love the imagery in this, my kind of thing. Really good write, that last stanza in particular stand out to me. Welcome to DP."
Posted by Unknown on "Battlefield!" by Lady Poetry
- "Have you been listening to Black Sabbath? These lyrics remind me somewhat of the tone/lyrics to "War Pigs", though this is a unique work that stands on its own merits. 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "Battlefield!" by Lady Poetry
- "Thank you very much... It is an evil remnant from war. As you get to know me I write a huge variety of work obviously I shall only post dark stuff on here! Enjoy reading what I write as much as I enjoy writing it! Respect to the sufferers of this tragedy!"
Posted by Lady Poetry on "UntiP.T.S.D" by Lady Poetry
- "You have very simply yet eloquently approached a problem for not only the great war, but every war before and since. As I have known some brothers who took their own lives, I thank you for this write. "
Posted by Eisen on "UntiP.T.S.D" by Lady Poetry
- "I suffer from PTSD, I was severely abused by my mother's sperm donor, I don't call him dad, he doesn't deserve it. wonderful write. "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "UntiP.T.S.D" by Lady Poetry
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