UntiP.T.S.D

By Lady Poetry

P.T.S.D. 

In a panic of mindless execution.
Power mongers poured their scorn on brothers.
Brothers in arms.
Comrades, friends, acquaintances alike.
All brothers in the band. 
Field of war a blaze of claret.
Grass no longer green.

Was a killing field.
Seen all for real.
Now a dream.
A nightmare.
A ruinous one.
Crying.
In sweat of chill he awoke.

Seen too much.
Seen too many.
Destruction in a black robe.
Hub-bub banging in his head.
Night until dawn

The racket ran in side his head.
Visions through childlike eyes.
Disturbed by evil images of war.
Friends massacred as martyrs.
Fight for hopeless cause.
It was meant to be the war to end all wars.
They all lost their lives.

His friends.
Nowhere left to turn
Put a gun against his forehead.
How he felt that bullet burn.

She placed solitary rose of red upon the remnants of his head.
Kissed his memory goodbye.
Dropped to her knees.
Started to cry.
No one could tell her why he died.
A true love.
A good life.
Gone in a gunpowder flash.
By ladylivvi1

© 2013 ladylivvi1 (All rights reserved)

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Copyright 2013 Lady Poetry
Published on Thursday, November 21, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Feel so much for those disturb by the evils of war!
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  • Lady Poetry On Thursday, November 21, 2013, Lady Poetry (38)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much... It is an evil remnant from war. As you get to know me I write a huge variety of work obviously I shall only post dark stuff on here! Enjoy reading what I write as much as I enjoy writing it! Respect to the sufferers of this tragedy!

  • Eisen On Thursday, November 21, 2013, Eisen (7)By person wrote:

    You have very simply yet eloquently approached a problem for not only the great war, but every war before and since. As I have known some brothers who took their own lives, I thank you for this write.

  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, November 21, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    I suffer from PTSD, I was severely abused by my mother's sperm donor, I don't call him dad, he doesn't deserve it. wonderful write.

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