Drowning!
By Lady Poetry
Drowning!
From
the edge of the rickety ancient boat you slipped.
Hit
the water with a near silent splash.
The
water is tropical.
Yet.
Sensation
of ice nips as your being slows down.
Melancholy
of nothingness invades your dying brain.
In
shock.
Rapid
loss of conscious thought.
Before
you drift deeper into unconscious lapse.
A
real need to sink or swim.
In
self preservation.
One
last vain attempt.
The
brief pain of realising.
No
ground you feel beneath your feet.
Would
love to panic.
Your
fight's all gone.
In
what should have been a desperate panic to save yourself.
You
became aware that all was lost.
The
bubbles dance to the surface of life support.
As
the last bubbles evicted.
Heart
breaks down.
Dying
in this deluge.
Water.
A
salty effusion body's dying rush.
No
time to gasp.
No
time to cry.
No-one
even realised you had died!
I wrote this in July xx
By
ladylivvi1
©
2013 ladylivvi1 (All rights reserved)
Author's Note:
wrote this in July...read a poem on here so I thought I'd post mine xComments on "Drowning!"
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On Saturday, December 7, 2013, Lady Poetry
(38) wrote:
thank you Mega x
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On Thursday, December 5, 2013, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Very nice. 10