Comments by All Members
- ""I dont want the world to see me, I just want you to" a vision of unrequited love, longing and frustration, oh so well known to many...but like as to a drug could you stop at just one taste???? I think not."
Posted by Solace on "A Taste of Heaven" by aXe FactoR
- "i can't help but sing when reading your work the inside of a brocken beautiful soul* miss talking to you
hope you're doing good* your friend *669*"
Posted by sixsixnine on "Look At Me" by aXe FactoR
- "reveal me is brilliant! love your work mel it reminds me of my own self.. you keep tapping into such real feels*) never stop writing * you're very talented * 669 * "
Posted by sixsixnine on "A Taste of Heaven" by aXe FactoR
- "another revealing piece of your struggle...Oh and for a title if you just want my opinion : A Taste of Heaven : it's such a beautiful line in the piece Mel."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "A Taste of Heaven" by aXe FactoR
- "first off a wonderfully written peice, i liked the dedication too :) , i would have called this " layers of veil ", but whatever works for you :)"
Posted by Unknown on "A Taste of Heaven" by aXe FactoR
- "provoked a storm of thought...elegance of emotional art...well done on a beautiful peice "
Posted by Unknown on "Look At Me" by aXe FactoR
- "This definitely hit a chord within me. In my situation at times I felt that I was incredibly lonely being with that person. Hmmm.. hint #1 it wasn't working out lol. Awesome write.. it dug up alot of feelings . :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "I was never quite lonely before" by aXe FactoR
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