Comments by All Members
- "This shakes me to the core. It reminded me so strongly of the one I had to let go of, and also how every second was excruciating. Thank you for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "To Hopelessness" by steuss
- "Oh, yea. So simple. I must be fucking up my query search royally.. damn, that 4 letter word. Glad to see this pop up on POTD, grats. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "A Simple Search Function" by steuss
- "Poems that "just say it" are, in my experience, rare. Putting the simple fact out there that love might not, or most probably, will not, come to you automatically. There's no genies in lamps, and love requires some effort on your part. I like the line "Pluck it out of life," as if you're plucking out a petal from a flower. A simple, "say it like it is" poem. Beautiful work."
Posted by Unknown on "A Simple Search Function" by steuss
- "Wow, your words flow through my mind and stir up thoughts that have been lying dormant. You inspire me. Thank you for that."
Posted by Unknown on "To Hopelessness" by steuss
- "I held my breath the entire time I read this. Your words are captivating. The beginning drew me in, for often have I ignored sleep for the sake of pondering our beginnings, or the purpose of our existence, or other such things. Then your words continue and it's almost like a blurring together of everything familiar to us all, but they've become so contorted that we can no longer recognize them. "still the echoes wait to be catalogued" is quite an intriguing end. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "Shuddering Existance" by steuss
- "i cannot give this piece the proper comment for i cannot explain what it did to me. i will simply and gladly fave this work. and i hope these words will remian fresh in my mind. thank you."
Posted by Believer on "Memories of Autumn" by steuss
- ""Does the quiet churning of rain generators was away our consciousness?"- I think this thought is what makes me think the most. is it really for our betterment? or have we stepped too far? in my opinion, i think we've stepped too far."
Posted by Believer on "Our Organic-Machinery Future" by steuss
- "I would love to reside in your mind even for a minute to capture some inspiration. Truly wonderful piece. Dont leave it so long to post again:-) Lovely "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Memories of Autumn" by steuss
- " Far better than what I could achieve. Organized form is not my 'thang'. The use of dance related imagery is something I particuarly enjoy."
Posted by Unknown on "Sunburnt Freckles" by steuss
- "Checking in every 6 months or so to read your stuff as I am wont to do. As usual I am pleased to find an ejoyable example of poetic story telling."
Posted by Unknown on "Let Hope Burn Through" by steuss
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