Comments by All Members
- "an amazing read. emphasizes the fact that there is a great fall from the top of the world to the pits of hell"
Posted by Unknown on "The Fallen" by Death
- "your poem spoke out, and yet it still rests in the shadows.....amazing write....."
Posted by Unknown on "The Fallen" by Death
- "the very last part was the part that spoke out the very most. amazing style, great concept....write on my friend....."
Posted by Unknown on "Death’s Invitation" by Death
- "Beautiful and very well structured. I love how the rhyme dosen't lie too heavily, and its an easy read."
Posted by Unknown on "Death’s Invitation" by Death
- "Wow. I'm so impressed with the wonderful way you evolved... This is the best poem I've read from you. I really love it... It looks like the darkness is really starting to embrace you completely... *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Fallen" by Death
- "I really, really liked this one. I always love it when poems talk about darkness and beauty in such a wonderful way... *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "A Dark Goddess" by Death
- "Excellent form and rhyming... I felt the theme jumped around a bit... Maybe add a little more to the end to sum up the rest? Good overall, though."
Posted by wilted on "A Darker Side of Myself" by Death
- "...Death is the person that you fear, Death is the person I HOLD DEAR....Fuckin' A!!~Lauren I loved this poem so much, I had to re-comment:o)"
Posted by lollipoplips on "Death’s Invitation" by Death
- "Wow. Huge improval... When you leave rhymes behind, everything seems as natural as a breeze in your face... Keep it up :) *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "My Righteous Death" by Death
- "Wow, great idea of how Death sees things. People afraid of something they cannot control or run from, when it's time..it's time. Great imagery ^_^"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "My Righteous Death" by Death
- "Good work... You should pay a bit more attention to Judgement... Check him out. *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "Angelus" by Death
- "You're following the same style line you usually do, so good job :) And I still think the rhymes take a lot away from your talent... *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Immortal" by Death
- "The last two stanza's pulled it all together great job on this one. I liked it mucho. ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "The Immortal" by Death
- "Good point. Everyone has the darker side you talk about... It's not worth it to hide... This is absolutely great. *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "A Darker Side of Myself" by Death
- "All I can say is that I know what you mean with this "loss". You manage to pu a lot of people's feelings into beautiful words... *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "Abandoned" by Death
- "I see you try to build your own style, and that's quite positive. Though this is a common subject, it's always nice to know new opinions... Good job. *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "Death’s Invitation" by Death
- "I think you still have a long way in front of you, but this is certainly the best way to start what can become a solid style. I voted yes for you to stay and I hope you start showing us all the value inside of you. *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Immortal Queen" by Death
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