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Death’s Invitation
By Death
Come take away the pain and confusion,
Take away my anger and reflection.
Replace all my turmoil inside,
With the hunger I cannot hide.
I long for a release from being so hollow,
This river of blood I cannot swallow.
The blood flows from the wound,
In the night I hear this sweet tune.
Take away this fear in me,
And give me life for eternity.
When Death comes for you, will you stand tall?
Or will you be one who will fall?
This pain I cannot bear,
Through the centuries I will tear.
The beauty of a new age is at hand,
I cannot slip away like sand.
For Death do I yearn,
This life has started to turn.
A new Angel is sought,
To this position I have fought.
Death is who you fear,
And Death is the person I hold dear.
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Copyright 2004 Death
Published on Tuesday, April 6, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
the very last part was the part that spoke out the very most. amazing style, great concept....write on my friend.....
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful and very well structured. I love how the rhyme dosen't lie too heavily, and its an easy read.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, Frater Synth
(66)
wrote:
Shit dude that was fuckin hardcore death is a person I hold dear fuck yea I loved it
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On Monday, May 10, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
i agree with lilith a style is obviously seen...you want death, and it shall find you::fallen one::
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A former member wrote:
I see you try to build your own style, and that's quite positive. Though this is a common subject, it's always nice to know new opinions... Good job. *Lilith*
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Jenni
(40) wrote:
"deaths is who you fear, and death is the person i hold dear" perfect line, great write -J
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