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"is i. I always imagine different kind of music in backround when reading your writes, maybe its just in my head.... "
Posted by Tonights Decision on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"I have no words here, but this is dancing in my head. I read it 3 times tonight, keep being drawn back....still with my breath taken away. "
Posted by unspeakable truth on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"truly your poem has the weight of the blade.... "She walks with an axe in hand tonight" that line realy stuck to me.. "And chase dreams across Flat-lined cynicism " i know how hard this is...in awe "
Posted by Tonights Decision on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"There were lines in this that took new twists I wasn't expecting, bending my brain beautifully to their images wrought so fantastically by you. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"this is intense. i adore the rhyme scheme of the beginning. i need to read more of your work. "
Posted by sIo on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"I always love reading your writes. Bravo once again."
Posted by Unknown on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

".. i cant find words lately. but you are exquisite."
Posted by Unknown on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"It's about me. *Nods* I decided."
Posted by Lolita on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"Oh in that case I see no reason why not to praise this write.. Good one Cloud Mix/Loop's off"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"Does an axe have a blade ? *Runs off*"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"Amazing, your mix of emotions paint a vivid picture. Awesome ;) ~Robyn"
Posted by openureyes on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"yes, its a rework :) it just was not perfect in my own mind.... guess im kinda chaotic but i feel like its complete now with some added structure. thanks ink tounge girl :D"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"Is this a repost/rework? The repeat line/title sticks in my head; I've loved it before and I love it now. Awesomely effective."
Posted by purr_verse on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"Very interesting. I love it. ^_^"
Posted by LadyMalice on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"damn that is fucking amazing. "
Posted by Moonflower on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"wow........its awesome to hear a new write from the genious.....damn, ......good write,........keep writing ~*D*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"*gasp* now i feel like i have been at a party for 3 months with my zipper down (how long this post has been up)... go ahead ink tounge gil, rip me up, i feel honored when you do it :):):)"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage..." by Bella Butchery

"I feel I can nitpick to that degree. Take a bow."
Posted by purr_verse on "Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage..." by Bella Butchery

"I'm very late to this impressive comment tower, and all the best compliments have been taken. So, sure, I'll echo them, but just to be contrary I'll also don my Pedant Hat, and point out that 'realization' is missing its 'A'. That's how good this is: I ca"
Posted by purr_verse on "Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage..." by Bella Butchery

"you're depressing and this is lovely."
Posted by Unknown on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"truly this was unexpected, this felt like a victorian silence sailing forever away.. classic melancholy written by the urban artist that is you.."
Posted by Tonights Decision on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"I like this. I like this a lot. Not only for the poetry, but I'm a sea girl. Salt water in my veins, so I liked this for personal reasons. Pretty."
Posted by Lolita on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"Wonderful, wonderful write. Haunting desolation wrought in shipwreck, ghostly imagery. You should have seen the look on my face when I finally saw a new write on your profile @=) I'll check out the Boondock Saints DVD at some point, too ;) -Brother Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"Timeless indeed.. ill agree with Col- a showcase of grit & emotion- and beutifully done so..lots of lines id love to quote..and that last line..ok im dribbling.. ill stop.captivating."
Posted by Tania on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"omg this is so good. it's vivid and the emotion is shown really well. "clouds boil black and wind whips..." has got to be my favorite line. nice work. *messenger"
Posted by thelostmessenger on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"this is what you do best...forget the inanities in the chatbox...this is where you shine, bring your charisma to the punch and sowcase some grit and emotion; feeling.....excellent, timeless feel...love it"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

""His fingers like lighthouses Scream a faint light" those two lines really spoke to me. i think i've felt that way these past few days..a light that's been dulled. i'm glad to see you posting."
Posted by dying angel on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"wind rolling off it into my bed. Enchanting"
Posted by Army Barbie on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"Never fall in love with a sailor. They're destined to leave. I know, my hero is a sailor :) On a real note, this is probably my favorite piece of poetry I've read in a long while. It's beautiful and haunting...I could almost smell the sea and feel the win"
Posted by Army Barbie on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"I'm glad someone wrote about a sailor. There's nothing more romantic for me and you've put it so beautifully. I love "a halo around his neck, and horns on his back". Yes."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

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