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- ""He kept her eyes in his bag And proves just how Wicked this world can be" Beautifully frightful, and then just beautiful. Love the rhyme scheme & the ocean imagery [the title rocks]. "Cobblestone hop-scotch / broken pocket watch," hope I don't offend..."
Posted by Unknown on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery
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