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"Great poem! I really like how you use the innocence of a child and a newlywed couple to make the death seem even more severe."
Posted by Unknown on "Faded" by one-fanged vision

"Love the last line 'Do you not realize the rest of us bleed?' Very touching, but harshly so."
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Spirit Wings" by one-fanged vision

"Excellent writing"
Posted by Unknown on "Emotional Disturbance" by one-fanged vision

"i cant believe im the first to comment on this. the thought put into it, and the way its worder, simply sizzling with brilliance and all around goodness. i love it, i really do."
Posted by Saint Sentient on "Aero Plains (a thought process)" by one-fanged vision

"HOLY*clank*...*picks jaw up off the floor*...SHIT! this is stunningly beautiful yet tragic and oh so tranquily chaotic...awsome...-]darkness[-"
Posted by whisperer on "Four Chambers" by one-fanged vision

"i can't believe you all read the whole thing %fanged"
Posted by one-fanged vision on "Cleaning Lady" by one-fanged vision

"that was awsome.. perfectly written. also, i agree with fallen about the last 2 lines, great ending.. i could see this being a great song"
Posted by yslehc on "Cleaning Lady" by one-fanged vision

"that last verse was a beautiful finish for this write+fallen one+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "Cleaning Lady" by one-fanged vision

"very good stuff - my faves are "set volume down to nothing yet everything bursts with the high pitched screeching of life" and " I'm something more than creep dillusion something more than pleas"...the latter is particularly good. Welcome! Fox "
Posted by flying_fox on "Cleaning Lady" by one-fanged vision

""up against karma" lovely work. welcome to dp. cant wait to read more."
Posted by Unknown on "Cleaning Lady" by one-fanged vision

"Good work, just got a little lost on some of the first stanzas."
Posted by Mistress Morbid on "Faded" by one-fanged vision

"Nice, I wish I could get my words out like you have."
Posted by Mistress Morbid on "Broken Spirit Wings" by one-fanged vision

"Not too shabby, brother. Welcome."
Posted by Alanarchy on "It's All Relative" by one-fanged vision

"beaituflly written i loved the flow of this and the way you show emotions in it=)"
Posted by nell on "It's All Relative" by one-fanged vision

"man do you have a way with words hope you become at least a postcard member great write"
Posted by nightshade on "It's All Relative" by one-fanged vision

"good write. kept me in the hole way through. i like the style its in... very unique to you...yet fitting for the poem. keep it up."
Posted by pessum ire animus on "It's All Relative" by one-fanged vision

"defintely want to hear this put to music and sung i love it so thought provoking i think i just might have a fav"
Posted by nightshade on "Nostalgia" by one-fanged vision

"i have a particular fondness for the third stanza...oddly appealing. :) I agree with Solace. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Ne Modo" by one-fanged vision

"Wow this was confronting and full of curious themes and ideas...very good work, very good indeed..."
Posted by Solace on "Ne Modo" by one-fanged vision

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