Comments by All Members
- "Not sure what type of comment this is....but I loved the shape of this piece. That will hopefully make you lose some sleep....or maybe I'll lose sleep figuring out what I meant....Oh also...maybe the title should of been "The Cheese". Think about it. "
Posted by Revolting Theatre on "she stands alone" by innocence
- "WOW! AwEsOme!! I love this write, I've felt this way many times also.. But there is a reason for you to stay alive, you just have to look for it. ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "Lost me" by innocence
- "i love this poem! i like the way it twists from you hating yourself to just gettin on with it cause thats what you have to do, just get on without no matter what shit is throw at you. keep it up!"
Posted by Unknown on "Make Sense" by innocence
- "It's like you looked right inside of me... It's crazy! I love this..."
Posted by Jane on "Make Sense" by innocence
- "I really like your writing. Reminds me of alot of things i've written. Just wanted to let you know that when you feel comfortable you can open up to me more, because I understand and i'm a very good listener, so yeah. Just know i'm here for you."
Posted by Unknown on "Diary" by innocence
- ""..but the only people around me seem to only bring me tears.."--This is awesome--PointlessX
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Posted by PointlessX on "Diary" by innocence
- "diaries are awesome. i have been keeping one since i was a small tot. back in the days...when big hair was in and music was at its biggest oddities. much love to the 80s. much love. ok i lost you..."
Posted by Twilight on "Diary" by innocence
- "this touched me deeply....eyes teared up thinking of my granddad and all the awsome things hed tell me that I was too immature to listen to at the time....god what I would give to talk with him again....good job...jaded"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "the words from a stranger" by innocence
- ""..you started out innocent, thoughtful and true but life tends to change that so your no longer you.."--I love it--PointlessX
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Posted by PointlessX on "INNOCENCE" by innocence
- "'Innocence is just a memory
of virtues lost and gone
and now the only one left standing
is a corrupted scared fawn' -thats the bit that really struck me, i love it.
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Posted by Unknown on "INNOCENCE" by innocence
- "the rhyming was smooth in the beginning but then it seemed to completely stop as the poem progressed. mixed me up a little. its ok though. no harm done *stumbles away dizzily*"
Posted by Twilight on "INNOCENCE" by innocence
- "i was picturing you on a podium telling this to your friends and family...and every one who has been misinformed as to who you are. "
Posted by Twilight on "INNOCENCE" by innocence
