Comments by All Members
- "This was fantastic! Great flow perfectly natural rhyming. Fun yet sexy and thought provoking all in one. Loved this! ^*_*^ -Ruby"
Posted by RubyXero on "I Know The Monsters" by Kristoff
- "Hehe. Amazing. It really sent a shiver down my spine. And it effectively portrays our inner demons and that we are truly one and the same. Sadly, others will not understand that. Hmmm... Well, done."
Posted by Unknown on "A Chat With A Demon" by Kristoff
- "Yes, they were originally song lyrics... I wrote this a while ago, I just found it in my binder of lyrics... Thanks for all the feedback and concern, it makes me feel glad that people care :)"
Posted by Kristoff on "Half-Empty" by Kristoff
- "their is no greater good or evil than that which comes from the heart and mind of humans. everything else is nature. "
Posted by Patches on "A Chat With A Demon" by Kristoff
- "These words would make excellent lyrics for a song. Is that what you had in mind? I already see a catchy chorus in here. Great meter too."
Posted by Unknown on "Half-Empty" by Kristoff
- "This is close to home for me.. It would surprise you who cares. A raw piece of emotion and I love the stanzas that repeat. Great write"
Posted by MissAngelic on "Half-Empty" by Kristoff
- "Trust me sometimes we think no one cares but there's always someone who does and they might not even be aware that your feeling like this until it's too late...I can say that from experience.
I did like the poem though. "
Posted by andhaka on "Half-Empty" by Kristoff
- "I'm sorry you're feeling this way , I found that in the end , the only one to pick up my pieces was me and that no-one was going to 'save' me but myself ... would you like to hear my impression of a suicidal optimist? ... " yay ! my mouth's half full of blood..." ...
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Posted by kinkifrog on "Half-Empty" by Kristoff
- "This starts out sullenly, and builds to a boiling crescendo of rage, and suddenly and sharply drops off to the depressed bleakness that I was left with as I ended this read. The repetition drives home the force of the words, weighting them with the embittered emotions of a terrible memory of relationship to another. Often not found is the means with which to cope these emotions, I hope you have found some peace in freeing these words to the quill.."
Posted by Skye on "Tell Me Again" by Kristoff
- "Oh this is so melancholic and yet still strangely beautiful. Love is always something that is difficult to comprehend. Even when you have every reason to leave, you still desperately grasp on... clinging to a sliver of hope. I thought this was a heartfelt write. I loved it. "
Posted by andhaka on "Tell Me Again" by Kristoff
- "This is amazing work.
I love it so much.
I love how you express your wrists as crying, and your logic completely dying.
God thats such a truthful way of wording the disintegration of logic.
Very Good."
Posted by TornPieces on "Besides Blood and Tears" by Kristoff
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