Comments by All Members
- "the chant was awesome. love the idea there. this was sad..to think people had to deal with these things. in a world where we have no choice but to deal with them."
Posted by Twilight on "cry, the beloved country" by theBAC
- "time passed. dreams now replaced with regrets...not motivated to take control. sense of loss when its just a second too late. but we all make it better in the end."
Posted by Twilight on "jacky d. & o.j." by theBAC
- "the ending was quite awesome. but with that already mentioned-"life fades as time stands still " fucking awesomeness!! cool thoughts. well done. good times."
Posted by Twilight on "leaving lenexa" by theBAC
- "now about the piece...you write truth. truth of peoples lives...you look outside yourself and into other people. something many poets find hard to do in my opinion"
Posted by Twilight on "when angels wish for snow" by theBAC
- "o now this was priceless. this is fucking awesome. when i look around at things sometimes i noticed that people and their ways humor me. liked this one..keep it up"
Posted by Twilight on "victory rose" by theBAC
- "i agree that this one was passionate. anger with the things you have done...hating your past and knowing theres a future. its all part of life. and you know what? life isnt so bad once youlearn from you mistakes. nicely put"
Posted by Twilight on "buildup/breakdown" by theBAC
- "ah loyalty. something rare to this world. notice the lack of comments? this poem rocked but no one can handle some whos loyal to a friend. its not in their blood. well done"
Posted by Twilight on "quo vadimis" by theBAC
- "I really enjoyed this poem. It was very well written and came from an interesting perspective. It's funny though that drunken sex is just cheap because men move on and women hold on to that. "
Posted by Unknown on "andala & the dildo of frozen tears" by theBAC
- "woot! too friggin' true. It was all a big-ass conspiracy to begin with, anyway; that's exactly what they knew we would do, and we did it. But I won't start theorizing like I knew what I was talking about, or anything.... not me.... "
Posted by Unknown on "jerking off in the reflecting pool" by theBAC
- "i know you have heard tons about this. this was quite the emotional ride. what got me was when she was so excited about the date...did everything special just for him. how fucking fucked up. i hate people..."
Posted by Twilight on "quotidian tearjerker: part one" by theBAC
- "i bet you those bastards did. you know what i bet you every last one of us is a damn terrorist in disguise..plotting the follow up to that blasted day. *busts out her pad and paper*"
Posted by Twilight on "jerking off in the reflecting pool" by theBAC
- "i loved the last verse. even the smallest rock makes a ripple. what an awesome thought. makes a difference to me anyway. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "the pebble minority" by theBAC
- "holy shitlessness!!!!!! this one corrupted and tore my repulsed image of sluts apart. yay for sluts i say! but this piece seemed to look deeper. another perspective. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "andala & the dildo of frozen tears" by theBAC
- "this read like it was being pulled raw out of your heart, incredible emotions, you capture it perfectly really."
Posted by nell on "buildup/breakdown" by theBAC
- "I like the way you have written about the 'first world'-it's the same in UK and around the world where one doesn't have to struggle to live-we take it for granted and don't make it up to those who need support, not 'aid' but having written about it, to be"
Posted by Unknown on "discreet lines & downhill eyes" by theBAC
- "synical line of humor at the end there. sidydticly naughty. ooh im burning gas. yes, it feels so natural"
Posted by Unknown on "victory rose" by theBAC
- "It is amazing how truly you've got this portrayed...i'm in tears, i understand these feelings in more than one way, now people will know, awesome job"
Posted by Unknown on "quotidian tearjerker: part one" by theBAC
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