Comments by All Members
- ""That touches every shore\and Breaks every wave" those lines are so effective becuase they are absolutely true in every sense...well done"
Posted by Unknown on "the pebble minority" by theBAC
- "i love the visuals that i got...you had me from the first line...wow...i would tell you how gifted that you are...but i think that you already know that.i'm hooked.thank you for sharing.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "whores don't deserve my heartbreak" by theBAC
- "I commenting on this after figuring out the whole meaning behind this. I must say, bravo. The whole first part of it makes A LOT more sense than just kids and their childhood. Well written my friend ~Loomer"
Posted by Loomer on "suicides notes & straightened coathangers" by theBAC
- "I am a teen...I am innocent. Do not comment back on this one, lol. I am as innocent as anyone else. This is a great write, and the absolute truth. We push on, knowing all of our past, and each other's past. Interesting."
Posted by BleedSilver on "suicides notes & straightened coathangers" by theBAC
- "My family put up a flag poll and it is still there, so not everyone is like that. However, this is true for a lot of America, "Unity" one minute, and back to commercialism, nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "jerking off in the reflecting pool" by theBAC
- "a very sad write... some wonderful turns of phrase, I especially like the last 5 lines in the first stanza. Fox"
Posted by flying_fox on "slunt" by theBAC
- "every girl in your pieces seems fucked up in some way. whether its emotional or physical. does that say something? just an observation."
Posted by Twilight on "slunt" by theBAC
- "i dont know what goes on in your head when you write pieces like this but it is pretty crazy to read..."
Posted by Twilight on "shiznatis" by theBAC
- "very graphically disturbng and in this one and only case that is a good thing. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "jag ar nyfiken" by theBAC
- "_fucking awesome...this is simply incredible...the wording is superb.i loved the use of the phrase "ivory bullets"...brilliant.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "troy's bucket" by theBAC
- "Incredible write, indeed. I enjoyed this very much, it is a fresh change given the lot og monotanous unorginal drivel I have been reading lately. I look forward to delving into your other works."
Posted by Unknown on "cry, the beloved country" by theBAC
- "An emotional piece, it's fairly common these days (teenage pregnacy). Everything can be made a success, keep spirits high. +T.P.U+"
Posted by Unknown on "conception: for holly" by theBAC
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