Comments by All Members
- "I think the old man is here to stay for awhile around these parts, and seems to be especially vigorous so far this season."
Posted by Patches on "Winter Damnation" by Fourknaz
- "Brilliantly written. You allow me to feel the squeeze of old man winter along with the icy fingers of Jack frost. I smile at their chumminess with each other too. Thanks for sharing :)~"
Posted by blue angel on "Winter Damnation" by Fourknaz
- "This is a great poem. It isn't the conventional, every day sort of poetry...that's why I like it, and why it stands out. A+"
Posted by Joel Baldwin on "Dorothy" by Fourknaz
- "absolutely fucking mind blowing, heart wrenching, tear jerking, and down right spiritually attractive. You made me want to both cut my soul open to embrace you and at the same time admire the beauty of "her" in the midst of all of the crazy uncertainty. This(these) poem(s) took me places, - not to mention the linguistic/poetic genius of this piece!! Very much a gorgeous piece, for sure a favorite! Thank You. ~Downstream~"
Posted by Withering petals on "Random Poetic Rants From a Dark Moor" by Fourknaz
- ""i want to be your vicodin" i liked that. and seeing the grin in my head made me smile."
Posted by Unknown on "Induced" by Fourknaz
- "Not sure if I get it....but I like it...
Very nice flow, springs deep thought, and sparks emotion ;}=
Bloth Andii"
Posted by SGT Bloth on "Plastique" by Fourknaz
- "I feel I understand this. Tell me if I'm off, but it reminds me of my feelings where I don't mind death or dying, or taking part in either, but I would prefer not to at the moment, I have better things to do. Good day."
Posted by MESUN on "This Mortal Coil" by Fourknaz
- "sticky hollow sins, together with "soul" spelling victim. I hate the last line, I want to rip it apart and eat it just to puke it out on the last page of any bible. Spelling end-game RESULT!
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Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Sticky Hollow Sins" by Fourknaz
- "very interesting write-quite amusing. this is complete madness at its best."
Posted by Twilight on "Dorothy" by Fourknaz