Sticky Hollow Sins

By Fourknaz


She rains down like sugar and lands upon my tongue
She dances around my mental stage and sings a little song
She could be the night for me and I could be our day
And every time the bells should ring we'll go out and play
She believes that she's a cat and scratches me on the back
She licks me down to the lowest point then stop to take a nap
She could be new eyes for me and I could be her heart
The sticky hollow sins we share will rip our souls apart

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Published on Monday, June 17, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A_Puppet_Show On Friday, September 10, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    sticky hollow sins, together with "soul" spelling victim. I hate the last line, I want to rip it apart and eat it just to puke it out on the last page of any bible. Spelling end-game RESULT!

  • A_Puppet_Show On Friday, September 10, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    The rest I loved, dearly. -Tiger-

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