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""I still find myself...to an audience of masked faces" The charge to this whole explosive piece so very well wrought....We've all found ourselves here but this is your angle. Nicely done."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

""I lost face today...", such a simple and profound bit of observation, or introspection. Very effective piece, with emotion and bits of self deprecation flowing together to create the whole. Well done! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

"I felt as though you are at war with your inner self. My reasoning is I see a small pattern of same emotion from your previous write. Your tone is superb! 10!"
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

"Sometimes even flowers seem broken, but they are not. They simply bent from the strong wind..."
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

"I love the voice of this. An awakening and bold resolve laced with ... something more than just sadness or loss, something deeper, more inflicting. The opening is strong and no nonsense, moving smoothly though and finishing with a resigned doneness."
Posted by NikesRain on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

"With surrender comes freedom. Foresake their masks and blindfold. Well written."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

"Almost a Frankenstinian creation here TG; come to life to taunt both creator and created. It oozes tension and something intangibly forboding. Cheers dear lady - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing

"A wonderful piece of writing and very clever how you incorporated certain known places and such into this. Great work, and thank you for your comment on mine and taking the time to listen to my audio."
Posted by Magdalena on "When She Reads His Literary Tone, She Gains Stars in Her Eyes." by soul_versing

"I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. "I refer to this state of mindset solely as, Black Licorice. -one word, disgusting. -No two! fucking disgusting."That line made me laugh pretty hard and that doesn't happen very often. Love this piece, very personal. Awesome piece! "
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"A tomato, saltine crackers, and a tin of smoked oysters - a meal fit for a king (or queen) Netti. So good to read you again and I'm almost normal now that I don't drink anymore. Enjoyed getting to know you a little better here in this personal piece. Be good to yourself and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"These days I rarely dig beneath the surface too deeply, but navigating through poems, sometimes they're like falling into a well to the deepest parts of the heart, mind, and soul. This was no exception. "
Posted by Patches on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"I enjoyed this a lot..A wonderful read, a small peak into the mind of Nett....Great stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"As always, quite a pleasure to dig into your thoughts. Thank you for the meal. Always delicious. ~With much love P.S. I miss you, also."
Posted by Dreamless on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"Isn't it strange how inner struggles brings out the best in our creative efforts? I think it forces the sincerity to rise to the top just as I sensed in this captivating work. Very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"clever piece that breaks down a serious struggle into humorous bites...proverbial sugar on the grapefruit. well done, and i hope you will write on. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"I actually read through the whole entire thing, thats a good thing my mind generally wanders when trying to get through a long poem or write. This was engaging though, humorous, just a tiny sad and perfectly penned honesty. Which it makes it perfect. There were many great lines in this, I'm not going to go in pick them apart..This deserves a 10 and alot more reads thank you for sharing yourself in this awesome write :)"
Posted by River Lily on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing

"This is so beautiful, a modern myth full of the most divine images. It felt like watching a weather map that had been enchanted by faeries. . . yes, faeries who had been listening to a lot of Tom Waits. Wonderful piece!"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "When She Reads His Literary Tone, She Gains Stars in Her Eyes." by soul_versing

"Ooh this poem was absolutely breathtaking. You sure know how to get a poets attention with this elegantly tasteful piece. 10x10"
Posted by Unknown on "_Beneath His Sheets _{Irresistible}" by soul_versing

"where eroticism and love meld, there is magic."
Posted by georgelstein on "_Beneath His Sheets _{Irresistible}" by soul_versing

"I had one of these nights last night. Weird, how you've been with someone a year and a half almost and yet haven't made eye contact while making love. Last night that changed and this poem is a perfect representation of all I felt. I can't even imagine how wonderful it was from your perspective. Well wrought, Nettle."
Posted by Lux on "_Beneath His Sheets _{Irresistible}" by soul_versing

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