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"Very thought inspiring...your works all have such deep emotions and this is no exception...-Methos"
Posted by Methos on "or am I just a tweaker....continued" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"powerful... self affirming... free... alive... i love it!"
Posted by Mr King on "My Own Conviction" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"never hit the pipe, but am a former tweaker from way back when; can't remember feeling this way, but then again i was young... your illustration is especially effective, defining a way of life that simply went out of control, in a controlled sort of way"
Posted by Unknown on "Need For Speed...a drug story" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"lol beautiful wrap at the end. we do all judge, some more so than others. but for a lot of people, it seems to be an ailing disease... or that could just be me judging and assuming"
Posted by Unknown on "or am I just a tweaker....continued" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"mankind is turning in on itself; there is no cure to this cancerous existance but extinction. We don't bother with staying true to ourselves anymore; pfft it's overrated. It's what everybody else thinks that matters (burn the masses)"
Posted by Unknown on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"awesome; and nothing but pure, insightful, pondering wisdom. Our history as mankind is fading as we look forward into the future. Our vision of who we were, or what line we're from, fades as we look forward to 'who we want to be'"
Posted by Unknown on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"we all do it...we try not to...we slip.we can't help ourselves.we're worthless humans...very provoking.thanx!:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "or am I just a tweaker....continued" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"This is even better than the first part, especially the ending, and yes, even those who try not to judge do, do it."
Posted by Ideas on "or am I just a tweaker....continued" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"thank you AD you got my point...100% I fucking HATE beinglabeled a "tweaker" by people who dont even know me"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"The flow is really good here, along with the content, it's all also very true. Nice write."
Posted by Ideas on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"*pouts*i read them out of order:(i'm so bummed:(tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"Then they are as simple and shallow as they seem. And we, in turn, label them as such contradicting why we first had an issue with them to begin with. It's a horrendous circle."
Posted by Unknown on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"And a label is just that, a label. It neither defines or dictates who we are but who the labeler decides we are. And if that person has no want or desire to see past our plastic covers to the person we are inside, "
Posted by Unknown on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"thank you"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Do You Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"I really like the flow of this. As to the content...we label to make us superior. To see flaw in one another so that our flaws do not seem as bad or real. We label so that we might think we see the world more clearly than it is."
Posted by Unknown on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"thank you so much for your appriciation of my thoughts and feelings and words"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Crusade" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"Everyone judges in some sort of form or another. No one is without guilt. Sometimes the cover is why we read the book. And sometimes the book supercedes the cover. Delicious write."
Posted by Unknown on "or am I just a tweaker....continued" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"hey thanks guys...or...girls...this one hurt comming out...thanks for sharing in it!!!!!"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Pretend Not To Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"*has never judged anyone*:Ptim"
Posted by suicideseason on "or am I just a tweaker....continued" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"Go to "or am I just a tweaker" continued to find out what happened next!!!!"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Questioning Society...Or Am I Just a Tweaker" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"thank you"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "My Own Conviction" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"Jaded, this is a wonderful piece that reaches beyond the soul, pulling at the inner self, in all of us. A masterpiece of darkness...Bravo! -Methos"
Posted by Methos on "My Own Conviction" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"this is a lot of things i've felt but didn't dare to say. i think this is a truly fucking amazing piece of writing, i love it."
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "You Died" by Jaded Jezzabelle

""a high that declines as it defines and confines us" i especially like that line, but the whole thing is great. i feel this one, all the words are perfectly put together."
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "Need For Speed...a drug story" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"Wow, the honesty in this is amazing, your words ring true. It actually makes me feel great to be a women...you have quite a way with writing..."
Posted by Unknown on "Not The Average Kind" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"There must be quite a few of these decpetive little shits running around. My condolences to you, wicked awesome write though."
Posted by Unknown on "Dirty Little Secret" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"*great."
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "Pretend Not To Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle

""i've crossed that line from use to abuse". this is such a powerful poem. it just fucking hits you. i love the last three lines i think that was a great way to end it. ...i really don't know how to comment on this, it's going on my fabourites, it's just g"
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "Pretend Not To Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"well fucking said! it's impossible to be someone you're not and it sucks when people want you to be. great write."
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "My Own Conviction" by Jaded Jezzabelle

"god this is so fucking sad...very captivating...i too was with you the whole way.this hit like an emotional sledge hammer.~season"
Posted by suicideseason on "Pretend Not To Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle

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