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- "ah... such thoughts are too often too true... does not money taint every endeavor? is not the intrinsic value of life, of love, of art and the humanities so often trampled by the extrinsic doggerel of the marketplace... very nice transition in the first two stanzas... weighty thoughts.. thanks!"
Posted by Unknown on "Art Is" by manunkind
- "this is wonderful, -'and the birds will sing our names Like Godless prayers.' -can't think of anything else to say -just really enjoyed this and surprised there aren't more comments."
Posted by Unknown on "Dying On the Mountain" by manunkind
- "i would try to describe how much i love this piece but im afraid it would never be enough, im glad i found it..beautiful write~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "dont touch me" by manunkind
- "bravo! when art becomes a burden/responsibility/job does it cease to be about emotion? does it lose its meaning as it becomes an obligation? very thought provoking ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Art Is" by manunkind
- "...seven more views: the full pack, if you will, but I felt this poem on many levels; it cut deep into my own used lungs: Verse 3 was powerful. The Views are black, white & bruised eternal. It's a marvelous piece; well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind
- "...it could work). "cancerous and rotting" Perfect! I liked the format a lot. Gibson wrote something called: "Thirteen Views of a Cardboard City", similar style but fictional prose, not poetry, & definately a different tale. I would've liked to have seen"
Posted by Unknown on "Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind
- ""the mist hung about the town like cigarette smoke" Stunning line/allusion; perfect for the poem. "vile like haunted milk" A fantastic metaphor. (I think you meant hoping, not hopping in #6? Unless it's something a little more clever than I saw;i suppose "
Posted by Unknown on "Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind
- "I enjoyed the clarity, flow and language of this piece. Very thought provoking and excellent title. Write the hell on..."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Art Is" by manunkind
- "this speaks clearly and creatively and quite bluntly about the truth of art and touches upon the truth IN art that cannot really be articulated into any kind of formed definition...you fully speak of the misguised"
Posted by AniDayz on "Art Is" by manunkind
- "...and the unfortunate corporate/financial mainstream that art is all too 'commonly', almost replaced with...nobody can buy nor sell true art...one can only create and experience it...well said."
Posted by AniDayz on "Art Is" by manunkind
- "mmm, this is interesting. thought provoking too..but then, all the great writers and artists...they aren't artists cuz they got money for it?"
Posted by Unknown on "Art Is" by manunkind
- "Really liked this. I think everyone goes through this at school! Made me feel so sad when all the glorious fantasy is ruined with the noise and the return to "bells and notes and rules""
Posted by Unknown on "I Write My Day Dreams" by manunkind
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